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Autumn is coming.The weather is sunny and cool.It's good time for a trip. Mr.Black wants to take his family to the mountains this weekend.

Autumn is coming, The weather is sunny and cool, making it a good time to travel. Mr. Black wants to take his family to the mountains this weekend.

Cindy and Laura are the two daughters of Mr.Black. They study at No.1 Middle school.After class at 4:00 p.m., they begin to make a shopping list for the coming trip.Cindy wants to buy chocolates,chips,juice and cookies.Mango juice is her favorite,so she wants to buy 4 bottles.But Laura wants to buy 4 bottles of melon juice.Laura also wants to have some bread,yogurt,beef jerky and fruit. After school, they go to the supermarket with their parents.

Cindy and Laura are Mr. Black's two daughters. They study in No. 1 Middle School. After the 4:00 pm class, they start shopping for their upcoming trip. Cindy wants to buy chocolate, potato chips, juice and biscuits. Mango juice is her favorite, so she wants to buy 4 bottles, but Laura wants to buy 4 bottles of watermelon juice. Laura also wants some bread, yogurt, beef jerky, and fruit. After school, they go to the supermarket with their parents.