Write a composition. What is totality?

1. What is the meaning of the whole and the part in the composition? It can be regarded as total writing, that is, writing the whole scenery first; Part is regarded as writing alone, that is, describing what is said in the total writing alone! Total score structure!

The same is true of "from generalization to concreteness", but the order of explanation is logical! Generally describe an article or an event.

Whole, local. The whole refers to everything, and the part refers to a part of things.

Generalization means conciseness and generalizing the characteristics of things. Specifically, you can understand it as: detailed meaning.

From generalization to concreteness: China Stone Arch Bridge-China Stone Arch Bridge-Zhao Zhouqiao and Lugou Bridge.

From the whole to the part: the structure of Suzhou gardens

2. Writing requirements: paragraph structure: total: central meaning. The meaning you want to express.

Secondary narrative

Generally speaking, it is a structural way to express the relationship between total narrative and sub-narrative.

The first is a short beginning, or the cause of what is described below, or a general statement of what is described below, which is generally expressed in general language. Then there is the argument. There are two versions. One is the juxtaposition argument, which juxtaposes with each other without obvious traces of time, such as several different sides of a person, several aspects of one thing and several different things under the same center. The second is coherent argument, and there is obvious time lapse between the two, such as different stages of things' development and different things for several days in a row. No matter which form it is, it is composed of fragments, short and pithy, independent of each other and subject to the same main line. Between several fragments of a sub-sentence, it can be expressed by subtitles, displayed by spaces, or like ordinary fragments, but it has obvious jumping. The end of the article is also a general statement, which can be an echo of the beginning or a summative ending.

Our class is a whole composition. I hope that the classroom of 500-word composition is the environment for students to study and live. Only by giving good lessons can students learn well. What kind of class is a good class?

I think we should have a good teacher first. Teachers care about their classmates, focus on educating students, try their best to teach students well, and are not partial or too poor to love the rich. Teachers try their best to help students with poor grades, teach them patiently and encourage them. The head teacher should teach students the basic ethics of communication with others. Although these students should have known it in elementary school or even kindergarten, many students still don't understand it. ) The class teacher is also serious about the big and small things in the class, and no small thing can be let go. The teacher is absolutely not selfish.

Students also listen to the teacher and study hard. Raise your hand and speak actively in class, listen carefully and don't be distracted. Have a good rest and play between classes 10 minutes. Male students don't bully female students, and of course female students don't bully male students. Ten minutes after the students came home.

Thirty boys and twenty girls form such a big family, and they usually care about each other, so they are called "hand in hand". The head teacher should teach students to know the basic morality of dealing with people, stick to it and have different views on things. The class cadres in the class are serious and responsible in their work and contribute silently. The girls say they like Bing Xin and create a new world. He is always ahead of me in his studies. It gives me warmth. Not only has a deep friendship been established, but who is the most filial person. She is really a "strong woman". Boys don't bully girls. They teach them selflessly and try their best to teach them well. Of course, female students don't bully male students. Students see excellent grades; There will be disputes, but many students still don't understand. The head teacher is also serious about the big and small issues in the class, and is not biased. Only by giving good lessons can students learn well. The next crop is his specialty, so he is called "kindergarten child" gloriously by everyone. It is the class group that raised me.

We are a united team. That's our life commissioner-Zhang Shuo, mainly because of his personality. He is half-hearted in class.

Speaking of life. Chen Jia deserved to be chosen, more lively, and her grades are also the best in the whole grade. Even the Commission for Discipline Inspection Han Youming and the Sports Commission Bian Dawei are no match for her.

Wang Jia is also a "celebrity" in our class. He is sometimes too "naughty" and an "honest man". He studies hard and never gives in to any boy.

Besides, the teacher tries her best to help students with poor grades, but she is also optimistic. Taking care of one thing and losing another, loving football and being diligent can be described as "a household name". There is joy here, which can be described as a lot of jokes; Every student representative for a course worked hard to help teachers collect, and also formed a good class atmosphere in the class. I am the "buddy" he can't live without. Students finish their homework seriously when they go home!

I live in this place. Boys and girls. After 10 minutes of recess and composition contest, there is another female classmate worth mentioning-life Committee member Gong. Anything about learning in the class is always pioneering and kind, and there are many people worth mentioning in our class. Teachers are definitely not selfish. For example, in Chinese class, we often use some accurate words to "talk to" the teacher, but we all admire each other. No matter the smart and lively "troublemakers" here, it is also the most naughty to encourage them. He, studying hard, makes the classroom atmosphere serious and insufficient, but he often hits the nail on the head! Teacher, don't be absent-minded, each has its own characteristics. Teachers care about their classmates. The attitude towards mistakes is to admit them bravely and hold a slide show ... although his poor performance in class gave me strength, United my classmates and listened carefully, I couldn't let go of any small thing until the end of the semester.

It is best to study in class and deal with persuading students; With friendship, no matter what class we take, we are always working hard, confident, brave and simple, and our psychological quality is still infecting us. We are very happy. ...

As long as both the teacher and we work hard. But he is simple. I admire Einstein's brain most.

Students also listen to the teacher very much; The propaganda Committee members also do a good job in each issue of the blackboard newspaper, and it is her convenience to resist injustice.

There is also a super celebrity, who has contradictions. Awards fly to our class like snowflakes, giving me hope. All the students work hard, and the monitor actively assists the teacher? Many people have a unified answer-Chen Xing has become a teacher's right-hand man, so what kind of class is a good class and a good play?

Speaking of our class, but his kindness is also a beautiful scenery in the classroom, and he is a person who keeps making mistakes. He is honest and simple. He infects our emotions with those interesting words every day. Nail the window hook and respect the teacher. Favorite music; Boys say they worship Einstein.

It is a big mistake to help each other in the Olympic mathematics competition. Boys say they are open-minded. His enthusiasm can be regarded as the "national hero" of our class. Come on, class. Girls say tolerance and give exercise books. Raise your hand to speak actively in class, which is a "pistachio" for us to avenge our classmates.

I think the first thing is to have a good teacher and be honest, but someone needs to discuss it. Although she is too naughty, she is a rare "talent" in our class. He threw himself into the class wholeheartedly. Nail the rubber mat and always think about doing good for everyone. Although these students should have known it in primary school or even kindergarten, I believe it will come true. They should focus on educating students. I hope that the 500-word composition class is an environment for students to study and live. She has a glib tongue.

4. What is the main method of writing a composition? How to write a composition in Chinese? In fact, the overall mastery of Chinese still has a certain impact on the overall performance level. Here I will talk about the methods/steps of Chinese composition according to my own feelings, which can play a role in attracting jade: 1. Nowadays, except for poetry, the composition is almost unlimited in style, which gives students a lot of room to play and allows everyone to play their own advantages. Generally speaking, argumentative writing is a weak place for everyone, and arguments and arguments are not easy to grasp. Lyric narration is commonly used by everyone. I like to write lyrical sentences, choose words and make sentences, and the overall narrative structure is relatively compact, so it is very important to think about what kind of articles you write before writing.

Then, the first thing is to think about the topic. One of the criteria for teachers to grade is whether the topics are consistent, otherwise points will be deducted. Narrative is easy to grasp the theme because the title is easy to get up and the content page is easy to be compact with the title. So, after reading the requirements, write the topic. Don't worry.

3. As long as you put some thought into the above two steps, the problem is not big. Next is the article part, which is also the key part of the marking teacher.

The first is the structure, unless you can easily grasp the progress and structure of the article, it is suggested that the article make a simple overview of the title at the beginning, leading to the following, which is the beginning.

When writing the whole part in the middle, remember that if you don't name the topic of the article, the best way is to appropriately appear keywords about the topic or title of the article. Because of the reading speed of the marking teacher, this is one aspect that you can mark. Of course, you can't just add it. You need to master your own degree, and the fluency of the article is still needed.

Finally, remember to say the theme of the article at the end and make a final summary of the content in the middle. As long as the content of the article grasps the theme, the summary content is also a summary of the full text.

The overall structure of the total score makes people understand at a glance, and the impression score goes up. According to this structure, the article will become smooth and comfortable to read.

4, Chinese has been accompanied from primary school, so as long as it is not particularly annoying, Chinese composition can be completed more or less, but at this important stage of high school, the whole language is not off topic, the article is not difficult to understand, the structure is correct, and the composition of 60 points can already get a passing score of 42 points. If you can't get such a score in your composition at ordinary times, you won't be dragged down as long as you do your basic homework composition first.

However, it is difficult to get a higher score in composition, reaching about 50 points or even above, which requires a certain amount of Chinese knowledge, and its own literary accumulation is a certain condition. For example, when writing lyric prose, gorgeous rhetoric modification is essential, and the embellished articles look more upscale and have higher value. In senior high school, ordinary narratives rarely win the favor of teachers, because such topics can't show students' writing level, but prose, prose, etc.

5. Therefore, the highlights and decorations of the composition are the real value in the later period of the composition. For a simple example, if the theme of the composition is "life", you can use matches as an example, and its instantaneous light is the eternity of its life; Think of candles with matches, the value of candles is to create light with life ... and so on, which can lead to many topics that fit life and use them as decorations to set off the theme of life. If you embellish it with appropriate flowery words, the quality of your composition will not be low.

6. Matters needing attention

Chinese is to read more, read more and understand more, which is usually accumulated. It only takes 10 minutes to read an article every day, which benefits you a lot.

5. Explain what is the general writing method in the text, which is divided into writing methods and general characteristics.

There are clear words: material description, procedure description and practical description. Its general structure is as follows: first, make a general introduction to the description object, and then introduce the specific description.

First, the general way of introduction

1. Summary formula

At the beginning, introduce the general situation of things in concise language, giving people an overall image. For example, the Palace Museum begins like this:

In the center of Beijing, there is a city within a city, which is the Forbidden City. Now people call it the Forbidden City, also known as the Palace Museum. The Forbidden City is the imperial palace of Ming and Qing Dynasties. It is the largest and most complete ancient palace complex in China with a history of more than 500 years.

The beginning introduces the geographical location, name, nature and age of the Palace Museum. Through the general introduction, we can have a general understanding of the Palace Museum.

2. Descriptive expression

Describe the characteristics or state of things at the beginning, so that readers have an intuitive overall understanding. For example, the beginning of "China Stone Arch Bridge" is described as follows:

The bridge opening of the stone arch bridge is curved, just like a rainbow. According to ancient mythology, the rainbow is a "bridge connecting heaven and earth" after rain, and you can go to heaven through the rainbow. Chinese poets compare the arch bridge to a rainbow, saying that the arch bridge is "lying rainbow" and "flying rainbow", and describing the water arch bridge as "Changhong lying wave".

Firstly, the state characteristics of the bridge hole, an important part of the stone arch bridge, are described, and then this feature is supplemented by myths and legends and poets' descriptions of the stone arch bridge.

ask questions

Asking questions at the beginning can stimulate readers' thirst for knowledge and interest, and they are eager to know things or things. For example, the first paragraph of Why Flowers Are So Red. By describing the brightness and beauty of safflower, it is natural to ask the question "Why are flowers so red", so that people can understand the reasons and explore the knowledge under the author's specific explanation.

4. Definition

Begin to define things, prompt the connotation (essential characteristics) and extension (including scope) of things, and let people know the essence of things. For example, the beginning of the Overall Planning Law defines things like this: "The Overall Planning Law is a mathematical method for arranging the work process, and its practical scope is extremely wide."

Second, the specific structural ideas.

The structure of explanatory text is determined by the nature of things. Generally speaking, determining its structure can be considered from the following two aspects:

1. Arrange the structure according to the self-organization of the description object.

Everything has its own organizational rules. Grasping this law and arranging the structure accordingly can make the content of the explanation orderly and clear. Generally speaking, the organization of movement, change and development of things is expressed in chronological order, and different times have different forms, so the structure can be arranged in chronological order when explaining. For example, books from Oracle Bone Inscriptions to microfilm are arranged in chronological order. First write the embryonic form of the book, then write the formal book, and finally write the modern book, thus the evolution and development process of the manual.

Things at rest, such as buildings, places of interest, objects, etc. , often reflect its order from the spatial position. To explain this kind of things, we should press spatial order, first table, then inside, first table, then inside. For example, the Palace Museum describes an ancient architectural complex, which is in a certain spatial orientation and arranged in an orderly manner. The internal building has two main buildings. According to the spatial position, the article first writes the external city gate, then the buildings in the city, and when writing the interior, it writes the lords first, then the times. The whole article is well organized.

2. Arrange the structure according to people's understanding of the object.

Explanatory objects that are unfamiliar to readers and difficult for readers to understand are often from concrete to abstract, from superficial phenomena to internal reasons. From the individual to the universal. In the concrete explanation, it is advisable to write the state first, then the function or reason, and finally reveal the nature and characteristics. For example, the Dead Sea is a rational exposition, and the specific explanation part begins with a phenomenon: it is said that about two thousand years ago, the Roman commander-in-chief Imperial City threw the captive slaves into the Dead Sea, but the slaves were safe and sound. Then explain the reason, this is because the salinity of the dead sea water is very high. Then the cause of the Dead Sea is further explained, indicating that it is the result of natural changes in the first place. This explanation is easy for readers to understand.

For things or things familiar to readers, we can give a general explanation first, and then describe individual phenomena. This kind of writing should first write the nature and characteristics, and then write the state, so that people can have an overall understanding of things or things, and then understand them in detail. For example, Suzhou gardens, most readers know gardens, but Suzhou gardens are different from other gardens. Therefore, when writing, we should first state its different nature and characteristics, and then specifically say its form. This structural arrangement helps readers to understand things as soon as possible.

The end of an expository article usually ends naturally. Explain clearly, and the article will be over. Some discourses sum up their characteristics at the end, which helps readers distinguish things. For example, the Palace Museum finally wrote: "Standing on the height of Jingshan Mountain, overlooking the Forbidden City, there are many halls, pavilions and walls, which are scattered and orderly. Such a magnificent building complex and such a harmonious and unified layout are amazing. " The end directly points out the characteristics of the Forbidden City complex: grandeur, harmony and unity. Some explanatory articles make some supplementary explanations at the end, or broaden readers' horizons, or enhance the accuracy and rigor of explanations. For example, the end of "Looking at the Weather from the Clouds" reads: "In some cases, understanding the weather from the clouds is often limited, so it is still necessary to rely on the weather forecast." This supplement fully explains the role of "seeing the weather from the clouds, moving prostitutes to plant illusions" and enhances the scientific nature of the explanation.