How to write a memorable narrative

Writing "people" is the most basic narrative in junior high school, and its training purpose is to express the character characteristics or ideological quality of the characters through description. To write a people-centered narrative, we can start from these aspects:

First, "trust" people with things to show their individuality.

Writing about people is inseparable from writing about things, because the characteristics of characters are always shown in specific examples. This requires everyone to have a pair of discerning eyes, and select the cases that best reflect the characteristics of the characters from numerous anecdotes and anecdotes. For example, in the writing of Journey to the West, Pig Bajie's greedy character is shown by hiding money in his ear. Another example is Shen Fu's Children's Fun, in which only three typical materials are selected, namely Observation, Blinking in the Cloud and Monster, which presents an imaginative and innocent "I".

Second, flexibly "copy" people and see their charm.

There are several kinds of safflower, and their personalities are different. In order to make the characters stand out, we must master some descriptive skills to make them look like eyes.

1. Write in a vivid way.

"Appearance is the key to understanding a character" (Nikolai Gogol, Russian). Successful appearance description can not only vividly describe a character's appearance, figure, clothing, manners, demeanor and other external characteristics, but also vividly convey the spirit with form, which is helpful to reveal the character's personality characteristics and inner world. For example, when describing the appearance of a teenager, Lu Xun grasped the three characteristics of "purple round face", "small felt hat" and "silver collar" to express the children of farmers on the southern coast, which left a vivid impression on people.

2. Raise your hand to show your temperament.

Personalized action description can express the three-dimensional sense of characters and make them look real and full. When describing the movements of characters, we should pay attention to two points: first, the image is concrete, so that people can see its "movements"; Second, it is necessary to conform to personality characteristics and let people see their "heart". For example, Zhu Ziqing wrote that his father bought oranges and climbed, shrank and tilted when climbing the platform, showing his father's love for his son at all costs.

3. Give a speech and show your spirit.

Language is a mirror to show a character's personality and a window to reveal his inner world. Sometimes, just choosing a few words to describe a character can outline his personality characteristics and reveal his inner world. For example, Chang in Lu Xun's works said, "Brother, I bought you the Three Seas Classic with pictures!" This sentence conforms to Chang's identity and vividly shows her kindness, kindness and helpfulness.

4. Draw your heart and try to figure it out.

Psychological description is to fully reveal inner joy, anger, sadness, joy, fear and jealousy. The role. It can also directly describe the secular desires of the characters, reveal the mysteries in the soul of the characters, and make the characters three-dimensional. For example, Andersen wrote about the psychological activities of the old minister in The Emperor's New Clothes, which vividly showed the surprise and fear of the old minister and exposed his inner hypocrisy.

Third, the skills of "writing" people and pointing out their styles.

In order to make the characters stand out, we must use several skills flexibly: first, we should see the big picture from the small, and express the characters by describing small things, details and objects; Second, to promote people, first suppress them, and then praise them when writing people, so that the characters are more vivid and prominent; The third is to set off the side, using other characters or scenery to set off the side. For example, Dude's "The Last Lesson" wrote: "The weather is so warm and sunny! Thrushcross is singing on the edge of the forest. " The description of the scenery sets off the childishness and playfulness of the little French.

Exhibition of outstanding works 1

"garlic old class"

Li Fujin

"Old class with garlic" refers to Mr. You, the head teacher. He has small eyes, a small nose and a big mouth. He is not tall, slightly fat, like a garlic, with a pungent temper like garlic, which sometimes makes people cry. However, this time he took the initiative to provoke us, but it was not spicy.

During a break, the "Garlic Old Class" watched a boy who was enjoying a musical to join in the fun and said, "Jay Chou sings inarticulate. I don't know whether to sing or say a song; No matter what you think of Chris Lee, there are no girls. " Unexpectedly, the teasing words of "garlic old class" caused fans to be in a mess, and he became the target of public criticism. Even Li Bo, an academic member who usually doesn't dare to look him in the eye, stood up and fainted: "Teacher, I think you are jealous! What if I don't agree with you? " Unexpectedly, "garlic old class" squinted and curled his mouth and said slowly, "They want money for singing, and I sing like hell!" Everyone was in an uproar.

It seems that Garlic Old Class is also very humorous. Once, when he was tutoring a classmate, Ye Li next to him accidentally spilled ink on the white shirt of "Garlic Old Class". Ye hurriedly bowed her head, waiting for the criticism, and the other students froze. But "garlic old class" looked at us and said with a smile, "Ye Li, what's wrong with you? Since you are going to spill ink all over me today, why didn't you inform me to wear black clothes earlier? " The students gave a burst of surprise laughter, and Ye Li's pale face flushed. "Garlic Old Class" also has unique attainments in teaching. From time to time, he integrated famous books, anecdotes and popular science knowledge into Chinese teaching. After his lecture, he was full of fun, mystery and unforgettable. The "garlic old class" is rich in knowledge and wide in knowledge, which makes us completely convinced. "garlic old class" is such a person, both serious and humorous, both ordinary and special. He left a beautiful scenery for our study and life!

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"Garlic Old Class" is a unique title, which will not only make readers feel that students have no disrespect for teachers, but also narrow the distance between students and teachers. Through a series of descriptions of outstanding characters, the article vividly depicts the "garlic old class" I believe that every student will be deeply moved by the teacher's appearance and personality, and I hope to meet a teacher who is as knowledgeable and humorous as "Garlic Old Class"!

Exhibition of Excellent Works II

My style

Ying yumei

I am 16 years old, with oval face, small eyes and single eyelids, which can be regarded as exquisite facial features. Oh, I still have a mole on my nose, mom said. This is my sign. I eat a lot, but my father says I'm a skinny monkey. I only eat, so I'm slim. When it comes to my personality, it is really rich and varied.

I am a fun-loving person. As soon as autumn comes in www.fwsir.com, I will go to my grandmother's house in the countryside. I am most interested in catching grasshoppers in the fields. Look! A grasshopper lay motionless on the ground. Hehe, its earth tone has become its protective color, and it almost fooled my eyes. I jumped forward with a jerk and landed on my palm. It hurt, but I didn't catch the grasshopper. I stood up and continued to chase the grasshopper. I jump, I jump, I jump again ... The grasshopper is still not caught, but I am too tired to breathe. "It really pisses me off!" I said angrily as a "crazy girl". After a while, I found another green grasshopper singing in the grass. So, I gently moved over and got a fright. "Ha ha ... I see!" My heart is sweeter than honey and I jumped up at once.

I'm still a fan of reading. Every Sunday, I will borrow a favorite book from my good sister, and then happily take it back to my door. "Ding-Ding Dong-Dong ..." I tried to ring the doorbell for fear that my father could not hear me. After a while, dad rushed out: "Good daughter, don't press it!" "

When I stepped into the house, I quickly changed my shoes, rushed into the hut with lightning speed, jumped on the bed and began to read, page by page, like a hungry bee flapping on flowers, greedily sucking the nutrition in the book. That beautiful language and touching story got me into the book. When it was time to eat, I couldn't stop, so my mother had to pull me to the table and scold me, "you little book fan."

I am also a girl who loves fantasy. Whenever the bright moon is in the sky, I will lie quietly in bed, watch the bright moonlight shine into the room and recite Su Shi's "When is the bright moon?" Ask heaven for wine. I don't know what year it is tonight ... "While fantasizing about driving a spaceship to the moon for a holiday and playing with Chang 'e in Guanghan Palace ... I also fantasize about writing a book in the future and writing all my stories, and ... Wow! So lively! Suddenly, someone woke me up. I opened my eyes. It was my mother.

I realized that I had just had a dream. This is a beautiful dream! I believe my dream will come true!

My personality, my decision. Look, this is me-Ying Yumei!

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Through keen observation, the author grasped the characteristics of my appearance, and through the description of actions, manners and psychology, showed my personality characteristics such as "love to play", "love to read" and "love to fantasize", highlighting the youthful vitality and unique and distinctive personality characteristics of young people in the new era. In addition, the composition language is lively. Although it is only a rough outline, the characters are vividly presented to the readers, and it is indeed a masterpiece of character sketch.

Excellent works exhibition 3

Crazy about "stars"

Hu Chen

According to her deskmate Li Jing, the star she worships is Stephy, because Stephy is very beautiful, and her role is always so frank and shrewd. It can be said that Stephy's smile, words and deeds in public completely conquered her heart. The following is a story she told.

One Saturday night, I was choosing my favorite food in the supermarket when I suddenly heard two salesgirls chatting without saying a word. A man asked, "Did you watch Stephy's TV play yesterday?" The other replied, "I looked at it! How beautiful! Hey, today is the finale! "

"Oh, my god, it's all food. I almost forgot! " My brain seems to have been electrocuted, so I quickly looked at my watch and then calculated with my fingers. It's not too late to go home and watch TV. The excitement in my heart is beyond words.

I quickly stuffed the food into my bag and turned my head and ran away. Before I got to the bus, I called my parents and said to drive faster! "Why are you in such a hurry?" My parents were obviously shocked by me. "The finale is coming, I'm waiting to go home and watch it!" I sat in the passenger seat and said nothing. Dad twisted the car key and the car started to drive. At this time, I really want to put a gas pedal under my foot, step on it directly, rush forward and rush to the finale of "impeccable beauty as a cloud"!

The car didn't go far before it came to a crossroads. I craned my neck and stared at the traffic lights. A second is like a year. "Oh, the green light! Dad, open it! " I patted my thigh.

Dad glared at me, honked the horn a few times, and then the car ran out, with street lamps flashing behind it. I stuck out my tongue and gave my father a thumbs-up and said, "Dad, you are a racing driver!" " "

"Red light stops, green light goes ... Look, the light is green! Dad, speed up, my finale! "

After I called "dad" n times, we finally got home. I was the first to open the door, turn on the light and turn on the TV. Fortunately, just in time for the familiar opening song.

Do you know my deskmate after reading this story? She is such a person who is crazy about "Star".

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The biggest highlight of this article is the true description. In order to show his longing for the finale of TV series and express his crazy love for Stephy, the author used a lot of language descriptions and details in his writing. In the description of urging language, tiny movements and vivid expressions, let readers follow the author's heart that is about to jump out and the accelerator at his feet, just like an arrow heading home. Besides, the plot of the article is moderate in Zhang Chi. On the whole, the article was completed under the condition of "Zhang", but the beginning and end are all "pools", which is very rhythmic and adds a bit of charm.

war game

First, there should be many "capable people" in your class. Please select one of them now. And write an article of about 600 words with the topic "_ _ in my eyes".

Requirements: 1. Fill in the questions and write freely; 2. Being able to portray characters imperceptibly.

Second, in the days when you spend time with your family, you are already familiar with them. Maybe you can describe their voices, smiles, gestures and hobbies without thinking. ...

Now, please pick up your pen and introduce one of your family members to your classmates. Requirements: 1. The topic is self-made and the style is not limited; 2. Describe the morphological characteristics and charm of the characters. Third, please write a narrative of not less than 600 words on the topic of "guidance", and ask to write the character.

Attachment: Writing Guidance

First, we can choose any "capable person" in our class to do his biography. He is either good at piano, chess, calligraphy and painting or proficient in astronomy and geography. As long as he has a skill, he can be included in the ranks of "capable people". Structurally, he can introduce his talents through horizontal communication; It is also possible to connect them in series through an event or activity in a vertical way for centralized artistic treatment.

Second, you can write about the bright spots of your family, or you can write about the harmless shortcomings, such as your father's diligence and your mother's verbosity. In specific writing, you can choose several wonderful events, select typical actions, vivid images and personalized language in the narrative to directly express the characters, or you can use indirect description to make side comparisons. The ingenious combination of direct description and indirect description can portray the image and personality characteristics of family members in a three-dimensional way.