Couplets on bridges

Rivers, lakes, sea shelves and Jinqiao; East, West, North and South Zhu Fu Road.

The last word in (1) is bridge (flat tone), and the last word in (flat tone) is road. According to the requirements of the positive link, the original link can be used as the upper link or the lower link.

(2) Seven-character antithetical sentences often use the metrical form of two couplets in the middle of seven-character verse, and their sentence structures are as follows: 22 12, 222 1, 1222, etc. The sentence structure of this couplet is 22 12:

East, west/south, north/building/Fulu Road;

River, river/lake, sea/continental shelf/Jinqiao.

(3) The arrangement of the seven-character couplet is as follows:

——| |——|; | |——| |—。

The situation is:

| |———| |; ——| | |——。

Can be relaxed to one, three, five words. Two, four and six words are plain and clear.

This couplet is misplaced (west-north-blessing, that is, ping-ping), while the following couplet is not in place (river-sea-gold, that is, ping-ping). Dislocation of upper and lower links (west-river, that is, flat-flat; Beihai, namely Xu-Xu).

(4) "East, West, North and South" can be adjusted to "North, South, East and West" with the same meaning, but it can correct the dislocation and dislocation:

Zhu Fu Road running from north to south and from east to west;

Rivers, lakes and oceans make up the Golden Bridge.

This is a good couplet. Although "East, West, North and South" are tied for four directional words, "rivers, lakes and seas" are tied for four water system nouns, and their parts of speech are not completely consistent; But it is reasonable to pave roads on land and bridge in water.

(5) Speak a foreign language that has nothing to do with it. The last three words "Zhu Fu Road" in the first part of the couplet are all italics, commonly known as "three oblique feet". The ancients did not take it, and today people "liberated themselves." However, due to the short tone, it is slightly discordant to read. It may be better to change "making" into "paving" and then concretize "blessing" into "wealth".

2. The grand plan of four modernizations adds luster; Rainbow flies in Wan Li.

(1) "The Grand Plan for the Four Modernizations" and "Wanwan" are grand and have desirable ideas.

(2) The first part can be used in many occasions, such as Spring Festival couplets, and can be used every year. So this semi-correlation tends to be conceptual.

(3) The first six words of the upper and lower couplets are exactly the same. Although some side faces have not been replaced, the upper and lower couplets are seriously misplaced.

(4) Keep the bottom link related to the bridge, and then write a top link to make the meaning more appropriate and correct the dislocation. The first part can be viewed from different angles: from a global perspective, it can be regarded as "inextricably linked to the world"; From a national perspective, it can open up a new road of "Kyushu Heaven and Earth"; Judging from the China Railway Bridge Bureau itself, it can leave a miracle of 50 years; Personally, it can be "the sweat of a lifetime" and so on. The above pairs of sentences (the first part) are all in place, just like the sentence (the second part).

3, the road leads to thousands of roads; This bridge extends all the way to Wan Hu Bridge, connecting the two bridges.

(1) The Federation adopts the method of sketching, and only talks about bridge seats and roads. As for the role of bridges and roads, it goes without saying.

(2) There are three words "road" in the upper part and three words "bridge" in the corresponding position in the lower part, and the levels are opposite, so the repeated words in the upper part and the lower part are properly used, highlighting two main words: road and bridge.

(3) The upper half of plain weave is dislocated, and the upper half and the lower half of plain weave are dislocated.

(4) "Thousands of households" and "Ten thousand households" have the same meaning, so put your hands together.

(5) The last three words of the upper and lower couplets are even numbers, which can be completely avoided with a little adjustment.

(6) In order to solve the above problems, the original text can be changed to:

The road connecting Wan Li Road;

Bridge frame qianhe bridge.

It can also be changed to:

Road construction: Tongfu Road in thousands of townships; This bridge spans more than ten thousand bridges.

4. Major events have nothing to do with wind and rain; Old students dream of rainbows.

(1) The first part is quite sad. Although it has experienced wind and rain, it has become old and it is unbearable to look back. On the occasion of the 50th anniversary of the establishment of the Bridge Bureau, I sincerely recall the past that "things are always unsatisfactory, but I can have nothing to say to others". Perhaps because I was too modest, I made great achievements early and ended up with nothing, which made me feel guilty. However, the author of couplets does not always stay in sentimental mood. As soon as I turned the pen of the second couplet, I understood that there was still an unfinished dream in my later years, and he was still pursuing it. This combination is lyrical and poetic. This is written entirely from a personal point of view.

(2) It can also be written from the standpoint of the whole bridge-building hero team, so that there will be no negative words such as "great things can be achieved", but the majestic spirit of "great things can be achieved".

(3) The upper and lower parts of this joint are dislocated; In the case of dislocation, although there seems nothing wrong with the upper and lower couplet, it can't be wrong.

(4) From the part of speech, "wind and rain" can be divided into two coordinate nouns: "wind" and "rain"; The opposite "rainbow" is "colorful rainbow", which belongs to the right sentence, so it is not enough.

(5) The original joint test is revised as follows:

Great things can turn into rain and dew;

There are neon lights in my life.

The modified bottom link and top link have a causal relationship. It is because of my dreams in life that I can achieve great things. Rain and Dew and Neon can be read together or separately. The word "rain and dew" also means "kindness". The reason why "old student" is changed to "life" is because "dream" not only exists when you are old, but also exists when you are young, which also improves the phonological effect.

5, a lake of autumn water reflects the bright moon; Two rivers and misty rain lock Hongqiao.

(1) The dictionary used in the sentence is elegant and the scenery is beautiful. The water reflects the bright moon at night and the smoke billows in the morning, which is a wonderful landscape painting. A "lake" can actually refer to Poyang Lake or Dongting Lake, and can also refer to a lake in general; The two rivers can actually refer to the Yangtze River and the Yellow River, or stand on the Guishan Mountain in Hanyang and have a bird's eye view of the Yangtze River and Hanshui River. The sentence is artistic and imaginative.

(2) From the part of speech, one lake-two rivers, autumn water-misty rain, bright moon-Hongqiao are all partial sentence patterns, and the verbs "ying" and "suo" are connected into sentences, which is not useless for confrontation. But this is not a qualified couplet, because the balance is out of balance, it really falls short. This shows how important the words in couplets are.

(3) According to the requirements of leveling, a good couplet can be formed by modifying half of the couplet. Try to keep the upper part unchanged, and the lower part can be modified as follows:

The mountains on both sides lead to the bridge.

Or keep the bottom link unchanged. The complete link can be:

A leaf boat floats on the sea;

Two rivers and misty rain lock Hongqiao.

6. Don't dream of taking your homeland on the third night; A letter from home to Wan Li.

The Association won the Excellence Award in the 7th Yun He Cup and the 1st Bridge Cup. The writer is Longbao Xu from Tongcheng, Hubei. Quanlian is a standard couplet with strict metrical rules, stable antithesis, even words and accurate parts of speech.

(1) couplets are shallow but not vulgar, love without hurting, thinking without complaining, leaving without suffering. In its shallowness, there is quite a shadow of "the foot of my bed is so bright" (Li Bai); Its persistence seems to be "helpless to return to the heart, dark with the water to the end of the world", (Qin Guan) gentle; Its lovesickness is almost induced by "but I feel the harmonious heartbeat of the sacred unicorn"; His parting place is nothing more than Su Shi's wish that people will live for a long time and cicadas will sing a thousand miles.

(2) The situation in the first film "Never dream at night, lead one's homeland" is completely different from Mao Zedong's "Never dream at night, vaguely curse Sichuan" (Seven Laws "To Shaoshan"). There's no need to curse here. It's all about care. Whenever the bridge-building warrior is limited by the construction period, or even "three trips are difficult to enter", all that remains is missing, "Is it the plum blossom that blooms the first cold flower when you pass through my silk window? ? The background of the second couplet "Wan Li wrote a letter to build a heart bridge" and Du Fu's "A letter from home is worth a ton of gold" (Spring Hope) is also completely different. They are in a peaceful and prosperous time, and there is no such thing as "the peak fire continues in March". However, there is an invisible "heart bridge" that has already been built, which is faster than Hongyan's delivery of books and can be reached immediately. The words "cited" and "framed" are well used and are the eyes of the whole association. In a word, this is a good lyric couplet.