What are the problems with changing sick sentences?

There are many kinds of sick sentences, but which one is familiar to everyone? The following are the questions I sorted out for your reading!

Change the question type of sick sentences 1. Select type

Example1(Zhuzhou Question, Hunan Province, 2008) Among the following sentences, () is not bad.

A. the quality of the machine is an important condition to ensure safe production.

B. Teachers from several schools asked him to exchange views on further studies.

C. Building the Changsha-Zhuzhou-Xiangtan Economic Cooperation Circle is Hunan's strategic decision.

D. In order to promote agricultural development in mountainous areas, it is necessary to carry out phenological observation in mountainous areas. Example 2 (Mentougou Question in Beijing in 2008) incorrectly corrected the following sentence ()

A whether to read more books is also one of the ways to improve your Chinese literacy.

Modify: delete? One? .

B. Although Liu Xiang is gifted in hurdling, he is also outstanding in aesthetics.

Revision: will it? Although? Change to? Not only that. .

C. at the Shanghai auto show, domestic cars emerged one after another.

Modify: delete? Constant? .

D strengthening the ideological and moral construction of minors is a major and urgent task.

Modify: Add? Mission? . Analysis example 1 asks candidates to find a sentence without language barriers. When answering, you need to learn sentence by sentence, and analyze whether the sentence is not good by combining the knowledge accumulated in the usual sick sentences. In item a? Good or bad? And then what? Keep it safe? Genus? Two against one? , item B? How many school teachers are there? Ambiguity, improper word order of item C, strategy? Should be placed? Decide? Before. The correct answer is D. Example 2 is also a selective sentence, but the way of proposition is different from that of example 1. The four options are all ill sentences, and a modification scheme is provided, which requires candidates to find out which one is incorrect. The correct answer is a, and the way to modify this sentence is to remove it? Is it? .

Second, the sentence type

Example 3 (Dalian Question, Liaoning Province, 2008) Draw a horizontal line where you think there is something wrong with the language, and write the revision opinions in brackets.

At the charity performance party, celebrities in the cultural circles sang a touching song. () Example 4 (Leshan Question, Sichuan Province, 2008) Correct the following sentences, please write the correct sentences directly on the horizontal line.

After the Wenchuan earthquake, we have a new understanding of life. Example 5 (Jining, Shandong, 2008) The following sentences are all wrong, so correct them in the original sentence.

Whether quality education can be promoted is one of the conditions to ensure the healthy growth of teenagers.

The meeting stipulated that each speaker's speech time should not exceed 30 minutes at most. Obviously, the sentences in these three questions are morbid sentences, so it is not necessary to distinguish whether the sentences are morbid or not, just modify them as required. The propositional methods of the three questions are slightly different. Example 3 has two requirements: one is to draw a horizontal line where there is language disorder, and the other is to write amendments in brackets; What are the requirements of Example 4? Write the correct sentence directly on the horizontal line? ; Example 5 Requirements? Correct the original sentence? , when modified, should be modified as required. Therefore, when answering questions, you should read the requirements carefully to avoid non-ability mistakes. Reference answer: Example 3: Release? Singing? Replace with? Songs? Release? Sound? Change to? Qu? Remove it? Sound? . Exodus 4: After the Wenchuan earthquake, we have a new understanding of life. Or: Wenchuan earthquake has given us a new understanding of life. Example 5: ① Delete? Is it okay? 2 delete? Most? Or? No more than? .

Third, paragraph types.

Example 6 (Chongqing Question in 2008) There are language errors in the underlined paragraphs, please correct them.

There is no distinction between high and low in life. Although we are young, we should let ourselves know? I'm important? . For parents, we are the guarantee of their stable life in their later years; To our friends, we are their confidants. Don't underestimate yourself at any time, but dare to say? I'm important? In this way, your life will turn a new page. Let's hold our heads high and announce it loudly to countless creatures on our beautiful planet? I am very important!

(1) The first word is redundant, and the word to be deleted is

(2) The second part is incomplete and should be added at the end of the sentence.

(3) improper collocation in the third place should be

(4) The fourth word order is improper and should be adjusted to

Analysis example 6 is a suggestive paragraph revision question, in which specific language diseases are put forward, and candidates only need to answer as required. There is only one paragraph, asking candidates to find their own sick sentences to modify. This kind of problem is a little more difficult. Reference answer: (1) Delete? Should? Or? Must? ; (2) Add? at the end of the sentence. Object? (or? People? ); (3) Will it? Walk in? Change to? Open it? , or will it? One page? Change to? Heaven and earth? (just agree); (4) should? Countless Release? Biology? Before.

Method generalization

From the above, it is only the first step to find out the reason through analysis, and it is necessary to prescribe the right medicine and make modifications. The principle of modifying sick sentences is to change fluency and correctness, without language polishing or changing the original meaning of sentences. There are four common methods to modify sick sentences: adding or deleting sentences with incomplete components; Improper collocation, tone or disharmony; If the composition is redundant and cumbersome, delete it; Improper use of words, change

Exercise 1. In the following sentences, the meaning is clear ().

A. Panasonic's new product, the thickness of 14 mm, gives people a visual feeling, unlike Sony's products, which has the illusion that it is slightly thinner than the actual thickness.

B. The U.S. government still supports a strong dollar, but this is just lip service or decisive measures, which economists think is negative.

The representatives of the World AIDS Conference include the directors of China CCTV and Dragon TV, and the president of Hong Kong Phoenix TV was also invited to attend the conference.

D. This murder tragedy that happened in an ordinary family is also a puzzle and discussion among relatives. No one believes that Xiaoli's mother doesn't love her family.

2. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().

A. In the article "Gardener without Nursery", this newspaper reported the touching story of a substitute teacher in Haiyuan County, Ningxia, who only took 50 yuan's salary every month and squeezed out a room of his own to run a school without a school building.

B. Two archaeological discoveries led by paleoanthropologist Jia Lanpo in the early days and National Cultural Heritage Administration in the recent days show that Yongding River, a natural corridor, is "the route of ancient human activities".

C the path of cold wave invading China is different every time. It depends on which part of the Arctic and Siberia has the highest cold air pressure and which part of China has the lowest air pressure.

D during this national festival, various national sports competitions were held, mainly including horse racing, wrestling, fireworks grabbing and singing. The colorful competition was warmly welcomed by the guests.

3. In the following sentences, the one with bad language is ().

A. If some big countries don't change their arrogant attitude in dealing with international issues, no one can predict whether there will be a peaceful day in this world.

B. The punch card system of moral education aimed at cultivating patriotic enthusiasm of primary and secondary school students is really sighing because of the understanding problems of some units and individuals.

C. Driven by ethnic hatred, the tension between the two sides of the conflict has not eased, but has intensified under the repeated mediation of the international community.

D. Usually, before surgery, doctors need to obtain scanned images of the brain of patients with brain tumors to determine the location of the tumors and understand the status of blood vessels near the tumors.

4. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ()

A. The expert group of the Ministry of Health diagnosed the patient as a suspected case of infectious atypical pneumonia according to the clinical manifestations, laboratory examination and epidemiological investigation results.

B. Now, I see the folks who have been away for many years, the hut made of stone and thatch that I grew up in the mountainous area, the rugged streets and the familiar and lovely local accent.

C. The English Broadcasting Lecture can help me a lot because I think the combination of lectures and exercises is its outstanding advantage.

D. domestic cars are low in price and suitable for people to accept. For example, the unified market price of "Urban Beibei" is only 60,800 yuan, "Engel" is 68,800 yuan, and the new "Santana" is only about 10 million yuan.

5. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().

A. Some people think that it is a bit inhuman for scientists to bury themselves in scientific research all day and not ask about family affairs, but the fact is the best explanation of this prejudice.

B. All kinds of fines and confiscations of government law enforcement departments must be turned over according to law, and shall not be withheld for personal use, and their sources of funds can only come from state financial allocations.

C. at dusk, standing on the top of the mountain and looking from afar, I saw the flashing place where the water meets the sky. It is a famous tourist attraction at home and abroad? Dongping village, an ancient water town.

D Now many primary schools allow students to drink water, go to the toilet and even interrupt the teacher's lecture. These behaviors, which have always been regarded as disciplinary violations, have been corrected.

6. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().

A Manchester City football team should guard against Manchester United's "terror left wing", not Dunn, not Belmadi, Wright? Phillips can't do it, only Sun Jihai can.

B. The dispatched offices of the Supervision Department of the Central Commission for Discipline Inspection should take strengthening supervision as their first duty, effectively strengthen supervision over leading cadres, and prevent power from being out of control, decision-making mistakes and misconduct.

C due to the low technical level, these products are either lower in quality than similar products in coastal areas or higher in cost.

D. The editorial board of The Great Chinese Dictionary has been working hard to compile the dictionary for three consecutive spring and autumn periods in order to make the dictionary have higher quality.

7. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().

A. In today's era of commodity economy, poetry has lost its former glory, and it is a rare spiritual enjoyment to read such a pure and clear ode to the motherland.

B the development of everything is ups and downs, which is determined by the internal contradictions of things and the external influences of nature and society.

C. The language of literary and artistic works is good or bad, not because it uses many gorgeous words and terms of a certain industry, but because its words are used in the right place.

D. The topics of some articles are obscure, not directly revealed by plain words, but implicitly described by some rhetorical devices or expressions.

8. In the following news headlines, the sentence with clear meaning is ()

A. hundreds of relatives of the victims attended this grand funeral.

B. Recently, the exchange rate of the US dollar against the Japanese yen has risen slightly.

C. On Teacher's Day, teachers hope students don't give gifts and blessings.

This is a photo taken by supermodel Sun Yan in June, 2002 +065438+ 10.

9. Among the following statements, the one that is not wrong is ().

A. "Northeast sketch is on fire!" Only by fully understanding the sketch acting skills of Liaoning comedians such as Zhao Benshan and Pan Changjiang and their effects can we grasp the profound and extensive connotation of this sentence.

B. He is an informative tabloid edited by his hometown, which is informative and readable. Hundreds of tabloids are printed every month, and they are snapped up by fellow villagers in less than an hour.

The dashboard on the shenzhou spaceship fully reflects the equipment manufacturing level and the quality of the technical team in Liaoning old industrial base.

D. He works hard and treats people sincerely. In life and work, he really used his own actions to shape great personality strength, moving and guiding people around him.

10. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().

A. As the monitoring of the ecological environment is strengthened in the production process, the pollution-free vegetables produced by the base every year are not only supplied to the main markets in this province, but also sold to Henan, Hebei and other provinces.

B. The fragmented context caused by the abuse of loanwords not only destroys the rigor and harmony of Chinese language, affects the expressive function of Chinese, but also dispels the profound and rich connotation of China culture.

C. Flowers, leaves and fruits of Zanthoxylum bungeanum contain aromatic oil, and citral extracted from aromatic oil is the main raw material for preparing edible essence and cosmetic essence, which cannot be separated from it.

D. Different from writers, photographers don't put their feelings about mountains, rivers, vegetation, cities and villages into their works, but focus directly on the lens.

1 1. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().

A. Children's education is a complicated process, far from being effective in one or two sentences.

B. intellectuals are generally broad-minded and have a sense of justice. The honor and disgrace of the nation and the rise and fall of the country can often arouse their feelings of serving the country.

C. We have an important meeting around the middle of this month, so we should get ready now.

D after the earthquake, the local government and PLA spared no effort to help. At present, people in the disaster area have lived in temporary tents to prevent aftershocks from happening again.

12. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().

A recently, the new district court concluded the case and ordered Xiao Zhang, who breached the contract, to compensate the plaintiff Hao Luyuan Trading Company for economic losses and legal costs of more than 3,000 yuan.

B in B.2003, the United States adjusted its visa policy, stipulating that the application time for studying abroad visa should be within 3 months to 2 weeks before the start of school.

A recent social survey shows that many online games contain violent plots and pornographic content, which will undoubtedly seriously affect the physical and mental health of teenagers.

D facing five American teams with NBA experience, China didn't get cold feet, but played like a rainbow in the whole game, and finally beat their opponents by three points.

13. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().

A around the goal of "increasing farmers' income", credit cooperatives strongly support the development of characteristic rural economy and give priority to granting loans to characteristic, high-quality and scientific farmers.

With the development of communication, mobile phones have almost become an indispensable necessity for everyone. However, with the increase of usage, there are more and more complaints about the quality of mobile phones.

C. After China's entry into WTO, it is undoubtedly an important measure to realize the collectivization of cultural industries through strong alliance in the face of strong competitors.

D. Dealing with the relationship between man and nature depends on the strength of the government, and at the same time, it cannot but play an irreplaceable role in mobilizing public opinion, supervision and inspection.

14. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().

A. Investment environment, service quality and the quality of government officials are all important guarantees for the healthy development of regional economy.

B according to the disciplinary regulations, it is decided to give the player the qualification to stop participating in all the remaining first-class teams this year and impose a fine of 40,000 yuan.

Before the discovery of these 27 bronzes in Meixian County, more than 40 bronzes were unearthed, with the inscriptions of the single clan in the Western Zhou Dynasty.

D. observing the trial implementation of the rural management contract law, the legal level of our village officials has been greatly improved.

Reference answer:

Is it 1? C(A) "There is an illusion that it is slightly thinner than the actual thickness" refers to "Panasonic's new products" or "Sony's products". B is also ambiguous. "Economists think this is negative". It is not clear whether "this" means "just lip service" or "decisive measures should be taken". D because of the different pauses, there are also two understandings? "To say that Xiaoli's mother doesn't love her, no one at home believes" and "to say that Xiaoli's mother doesn't love her home, no one believes". )

2.A(B) "Two major archaeological discoveries led by ..." has mixed sentences. It should be changed to "Discoveries of two major archaeological studies conducted by ...". There are two ways to change sentence C. "It depends on which part of the Arctic and Siberia has the highest air pressure and which part of China has the lowest air pressure" or "It depends on which part of the Arctic and Siberia has the highest air pressure and which part of China has the lowest air pressure". D is ambiguous. It is not clear whether "various" embellishes "nation" or "sports competition". )

3.c (incomplete composition, lack of predicate after "both sides of the conflict are driven by national hatred"); In addition, the phrase "despite repeated mediation by the international community" should be moved before the phrase "both sides of the conflict are driven by national hatred". )

4. One is "hearing the voice of ...", and the verb-object collocation is improper; Second, the composition is incomplete, so the preposition "Yong" or "Yi" should be added before "Stone Cottage". C sentence is mixed, and the last clause can be changed to "because of its outstanding advantages?" Combine lectures with exercises. There are many problems with "D". The most obvious one is that the "left and right" at the end of the sentence should be deleted. The whole sentence can be modified as follows: "Domestic cars are low in price and easy to be accepted by ordinary people. Do you like them? The unified market price of Beibei in the urban area is only 60,800. 68,800' Inger', and the new' Santana' talent 10 million ". )

In sentence C (a), "however" is the turning point of the first half of the sentence, while "fact is the best explanation" acknowledges the previous prejudice, which can be changed to "fact proves that this is a prejudice" or "fact is the best rebuttal to this prejudice". The mixed sentence B can be changed to "its funds can only come from the state financial allocation" or "its funds can only come from the state finance". D students' behavior has been recognized now, so it can't be said to be "corrected". This topic combines "structural errors" and "semantic errors" in the same test, paying attention to the practical use of language, and the direction of examination has changed greatly compared with previous years. )

6. (1) "The important task of preventing' Left' terrorism", Dunn can't ... "or" Manchester City football players should take on Manchester United's defense? Dunn can't "intimidate the left". C the word "no" is out of order and should be moved to the front of "quality". D repetition and improper word order can be changed to "in order to make the dictionary have higher quality, the editorial board of the Great Chinese Dictionary has devoted itself to revising the dictionary for three spring and autumn periods". )

7. Sentence (b) is a mixture, and the correct statement should be "... this is determined by the internal contradictions of things and the external influences of nature and society". C careless care, or inconsistency, "the language of literary works is good or bad" has two sides, "but its words are used in places" and so on, only involving one aspect. It should be changed to "it's not that it uses a lot of flowery words and terms of an industry, but whether its words are in place." The theme of "d" ... is description ",and the subject-predicate collocation is improper; In addition, there is still a lack of the word "de", which can be changed to "some articles have obscure themes, which are not directly expressed in plain words, but are implicitly revealed through some rhetorical means or expressions". )

8.B(A) is ambiguous. It is not clear whether "hundreds" refers to "victims" or "relatives". C "Don't" try to "send blessings" or just "give gifts", which is ambiguous. D is also ambiguous. It is not clear whether it refers to the photos taken by Sun Yan or others. )

9. The allegation of "Qi" in c (a) is unknown, so it should be changed to "Zhao Benshan, Pan Changjiang and other Liaoning comedians' acting skills and sketch effects", so that "Qi" refers to comedians. B Repetition is redundant, and "in time" should be deleted. D "shaping great personality strength", the verb-object collocation is improper. )

10.B(A subject and predicate are not collocated properly, and it should be changed to "The pollution-free vegetables produced by our base every year ..." C sentence is mixed and can be deleted ",which is inseparable from it". The word order of d is improper, and it should be changed to "The photographer did not pour his feelings about mountains, rivers, vegetation, cities and villages into his works". )

1 1.B(A) The subject and object are not properly matched, and it should be changed to "Educating children is a complicated process ..." c) The meaning is unclear, and the word "before and after" should be deleted. D "Aftershock" cannot be "prevented". In addition, "aftershock" and "again" have the same meaning, which can be changed to "in case of earthquake happening again" or "in case of aftershock". )

12.C(A is ambiguous, it is unclear whether the lawyer's fee is more than 3,000 yuan or the total economic loss and lawyer's fee is more than 3,000 yuan; In addition, the words "duo" and "duo" in More than 3,000 Yuan are repeated. Sentence B is mixed, instead of saying "the time is ……", it can be changed to "it is stipulated to apply for a visa for studying abroad within 3 months to 2 weeks before the start of school". Component d is incomplete. "Five players with NBA experience" describes players, not the American team, so "players" should be added before "American team". )

13. C (A. "High quality" and "farmers" are not properly matched. B "About" is improperly used and can be changed to "mobile phone quality complaint" or "mobile phone quality complaint". Second, the words "essential" and "necessary" are redundant, and the D sentence is mixed, which can be changed to "At the same time, we cannot but play an irreplaceable role in public opinion mobilization, supervision and inspection" or "At the same time, non-governmental forces can also play an irreplaceable role in public opinion mobilization, supervision and inspection". )