How to write the defense draft of the thesis?

Writing idea: Write down what you want to express in your paper, including the purpose and significance of writing this paper and the components of the paper.

Good Morning, everyone!

I am a student of grade 20XX xxx, and my tutor is teacher xxx. The title of my thesis is "Analysis on the Development of Guizhou Wine Culture Tourism".

First of all, I want to talk about the purpose and significance of writing this article.

In fact, although many people have done research on the tourism development and design of wine culture, including the tourism development of Guizhou wine culture, I chose this as my thesis topic, first of all, based on my hobbies; At the same time, it is also based on the following three considerations:

1. Now, with the further development of domestic tourism, the mode of tourism has been gradually upgraded, and it has begun to change from the era of sightseeing to the era of experiencing tourism. The types of tourism have also begun to develop from mass tourism to specialization and diversification, and theme tourism has become the trend of tourism development. The wine culture tourism in this paper is a special kind of tourism. The writing purpose of this paper is to provide a voice and idea for the tourism planning and development of our province under the background of theme tourism development.

2. We know that the life of tourism lies in its characteristics, and the development of tourism with characteristics can be long-term. Wine culture tourism is a major feature of Guizhou tourism. As the hometown of Moutai, Guizhou not only has a long history of wine culture, but also has rich tourism resources of wine culture. Exploring the tourism development of Guizhou wine culture is not only of special significance to Guizhou, but also of reference significance to the tourism development of domestic wine culture.

I chose this topic. To tell you the truth, at the beginning, I thought there was enough literature in this field and it should be easy to write a paper, so I chose it.

Secondly, I want to focus on the main contents of this article and the main issues discussed.

This paper mainly expounds the connotation of wine culture and wine culture tourism, and analyzes the conditions and existing problems of developing wine culture tourism in Guizhou. On this basis, some suggestions on the development of Guizhou wine culture tourism products are put forward.

This paper mainly consists of five parts:

1. Overview of wine culture tourism. In this part, firstly, the definitions of wine culture and wine culture tourism are introduced, and the types of wine culture tourism resources in Guizhou are emphatically expounded.

2. The conditions of developing wine culture tourism in Guizhou were analyzed mainly from the aspects of geographical climate, resource conditions, social culture and government policies, thus fully demonstrating the feasibility and necessity of developing wine culture tourism in Guizhou. This is the difficulty of this paper.

3. The outstanding problems in the development of Guizhou wine culture tourism were analyzed, such as serious separation of wine tourism, single product, low degree of development and innovation, and lack of professional planning, promotion and marketing. I think this is the highlight of this article.

4. In view of the problems existing in Guizhou, the author tries to put forward some suggestions on the development of Guizhou wine culture tourism products. Integrate and reshape Guizhou wine culture, further develop wine culture tourism festival, completely activate the vitality of wine tourism, so as to shape national wine brands and create brand effects, and then develop wine town tourism, create mature wine culture tourism routes, and finally promote the all-round development of Guizhou wine tourism combined with other industries, and truly realize the re-development and glory of Guizhou tourism. I think this is one of the few innovations in this paper.

5. Finally, summarize the whole paper and give the direction.

Finally, I want to talk about the defects of this article and my writing experience.

Because of my limited level, I don't have a deep understanding of some concepts and methods, and my imagination about development is just some suggestions given by my classmates on the basis of analyzing the current situation in Guizhou. My thinking is definitely not deep enough and comprehensive enough. At the same time, I think the biggest regret of this article is that there is no corresponding data analysis and chart explanation, so that the article is not convincing enough.

On the one hand, my professional data collection and processing ability is not enough, on the other hand, I lack the existing professional, authoritative and latest wine culture tourism data. Without the statistics of the corresponding departments, it is certainly not easy to obtain. In addition, although I have checked it carefully, there may still be some typos or sentences that are not fluent.

About the experience: Frankly speaking, through the writing of this paper, information retrieval, reading and writing, basic knowledge, communication skills and other aspects have been improved to some extent. However, the process of writing and analyzing this paper is also a process in which I become more and more aware of my weak knowledge and analytical ability.

Although I try my best to collect materials and analyze them by using what I have learned, there are still many shortcomings in the paper, such as incomplete analysis or unspecific suggestions, which need to be improved. So please criticize and correct me so that I can do better in my future study and work.

My presentation is over, please ask the teacher questions. thank you