I write the first grade in my memory, give a few good beginnings and endings, and write a composition for the first grade.

Introductory songs (Tanci (Tanci) and some local operas)

Blue planet, endless rotation, magnificent sea, white waves; A trickle flows through fields, villages and towns. These are all manifestations of vitality.

(Excerpted from Hebei examinee "Life is in Your Hands")

The wind chimes of youth opened my heart, the colored flutes of youth blew my dreams, and the notes of youth drove me to hope. Youth, this beautiful season, is the time for us to sow hope, cherish hope, grasp hope and let hope shine in our hands.

(Excerpted from "Grasping Youth" by students in Hebei Province)

Some people say that the ship of life cannot live without ideal sails.

It is said that the ideal of life is for the ideal life.

The happiest time in an ideal life is the flower season of dreams.

(Excerpted from Jingzhou examinee "Flower Season with Dreams")

Love is a ray of sunshine in winter, which dispels the cold frost; Love is a shower after a long drought, nourishing a broken heart; Love is a beacon in Wang Yang, which indicates the hope of a new life.

(Excerpted from "Bringing Love to Others" by Jingzhou Examiner)

I don't know if I have ever passed by, but you are as light as a thin cloud on the horizon. Even if you can't meet it, it will take away my mind's attention. ...

(Excerpted from Guangdong examinee "I pay attention to the dribs and drabs of life")

In life, everyone will encounter unpleasant things, such as setbacks, misunderstandings, criticisms and so on. The feeling at that time was undoubtedly an insurmountable obstacle. But then suddenly looking back, it was just a wave in the long river of life, a wisp of fragrance of colorful years.

(Excerpted from Chongqing examinee Xiangxiang)

Life needs applause.

Many people often lament that educated youth is hard to find. What is a bosom friend? Isn't the applause of life a confidant?

(Excerpted from Anhui examinee "Life Needs Applause")

Just as wind is to sails, just as temperature is to seeds, just as sunshine and rain are to the growth of everything, praise is an indispensable spiritual nutrition in our growth process.

(Excerpted from Anhui examinee "Eager for Praise")

There is a flower in the world that will never fade, and that is a smile. It is open all year round, north and south, as long as there are crowds. The nobler the thought, the more beautiful the flower of smile.

(Excerpted from Jingzhou examinee "Bringing Smile to Life")

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Life is a burning flame, and it will shine in the ashes, because life is in your hands, you just need to grasp it.

(Excerpted from Hebei examinee "Life is in Your Hands")

What is youth? Youth is hope. What does youth need? Youth needs to be grasped. Youth without regrets, perfect answer sheet, grasp it well. When the spring breeze blows out, looking back, grasping carefully and doing everything well, at least "this" is also a confession of our life. Hold your youth in your hands, keep your hopes in your heart, pursue with your hopes and dreams, struggle and create the brilliance of your youth.

(Excerpted from Hebei students' Grasping Youth)

In the flower season, I hope I can always remember the good words of the sages:

The ship of life cannot live without an ideal sail.

The ideal of life is for the ideal life.

(Excerpted from Jingzhou examinee "Flower Season with Dreams")

Let's take action to bring love to those children who are out of school, to those lonely old people … to everyone around us. When you give your love to others, you also get great happiness. I believe that as long as everyone gives a love, the world will become a beautiful world.

(Excerpted from Jingzhou examinee "Bringing Love to Others")

Attention need not be melodramatic, attention will only be unintentional, that seriousness and persistence, like a butterfly flying to the sky, took away my attention, inadvertently brought news of life and love, and gave life a little bit!

(Excerpted from Guangdong examinee "I pay attention to the dribs and drabs of life")

Every time I think about it, my heart is sour, but this grievance has not sublimated into hate, but it has created my strong character, and I understand the teacher's mood. If it weren't for that time, would I feel wronged? Ha ha! There is no trace of time, only fragrance.

(Excerpted from Chongqing examinee Xiangxiang)

The applause of life will never stop? It always inspires people to pursue the nobleness and perfection of the soul. Applause is more important than love and money.

Let applause ring, life needs applause.

Dear teachers, how eager to get your praise, even if it is a simple sentence or two!

(Excerpted from Anhui examinee "Eager for Praise")

Bring a smile to life, decorate life with a smile. You don't have to look for happiness and beg for time's mercy, but walk through the four seasons with a smile, then store it as happy wine and enjoy life.

(Excerpted from Jingzhou examinee "Bringing Smile to Life")

Highly generalized, rich in connotation, meaningful and intriguing.

Taste the past, bitter with sweet, spray after spray, fragrance after fragrance like an eternal flame, lit my lamp of hope, so I saw the road clearly and moved on.

(Excerpted from Chongqing examinee "A wisp of fragrance")

There are dances in ordinary life and songs in trivial things. Success is an enterprising melody plucked from the heartstrings, and success is a calm emotional lake thrown into a series of armchairs by a little progress. What's wrong with savoring your tiny success and not being applauded?

Excerpted from Anhui examinee "Applause for yourself")

Praise is to ignite others' hearts with your own heart, find others' hearts with your own heart, and moisten things with spring breeze and drizzle.

(Excerpted from Anhui examinee "Eager for Praise")

In winter, there is no prosperity in spring, no publicity in summer and no richness in autumn, but what she has is holy, resolute and selfless quality.

(Excerpted from Zibo examinee "Winter Personality")

Yes, love blows away the shadow of life and scatters the bright sunshine. If happiness is fire, love is burning, happiness is water and love is flowing. Love and happiness go hand in hand!

(Excerpted from Jingzhou examinee "Bringing Love to Others")

Innovation means bidding farewell to the past, grasping the present and welcoming the future.

(Excerpted from Chongqing examinee "Cool")

How's it going? Lots of trouble. But I always believe that no matter how cloudy the weather is, it will be fine.

(Excerpted from Linyi examinee "Growing Pains")

So I rearranged my old bags, propped up the dust on my body, replaced the illusion of the past with dignity, and left a deep mark on my feet with my firmness. Go forward bravely, face forward, meet the glory of life without regrets, and create the fiery red of life.

(Excerpted from Henan examinee "When I Face the Chaoyang")

I thank nature and its angelic notes, which endow me with the same personality as wind, flowers and grass and make me intoxicated in another happy world.

(Excerpted from Yiyang examinee "Thanksgiving")

In the long history of the development of human society, no one will reach the other side of the ideal smoothly, there will always be ups and downs, and there will always be stormy waves. Therefore, we should grasp the coordinates of life and always find our own position. In this way, a bright tomorrow and a bright future must belong to you.

(Excerpted from Hebei examinee "Grasping Life Coordinates")

Living should not only have integrity, be neither humble nor supercilious, but also make your life meaningful.

(Excerpted from Hebei examinee "Life is in Your Hands")

With a sincere heart, spread your brightest smile to every corner of the world and every space of your life, and your life will bloom with beautiful flowers.

(Excerpted from Jingzhou examinee "Bringing Smile to Life")

The performance without applause was terrible. Who can stand the dead silence? Life without applause is sad. Who wants to live in depression?

(Excerpted from Anhui examinee "Life Needs Applause")

Art is beautiful, but the art of cooperative creation is even better. It is precisely because human beings know how to cooperate that they have created more beauty for the world.

(Excerpted from Nantong examinee "Cooperation")

Love is the most precious soul of a nation and the strongest fortress of a country. As long as there is love, no matter how hard it is, it can turn the tide and knock down the building.

(Excerpted from Jingzhou examinee "Bringing Love to Others")

Love is rippling in my heart, and I am also paying close attention to this silent love.

Ordinary is not mediocre, ordinary is the beauty of small!

No matter how small a life is, it also has the value of being concerned.

(Excerpted from Guangdong examinee "I pay attention to the dribs and drabs of life")

Blue sky, just when I was speechless, a strong call filled my body and mind with blue light, and a voice said softly:

"fly! Backwardness and ignorance should not bind your wings, fly to the blue sky and fly for your ideals! "

(Excerpted from Henan examinee "When I Face the Blue Sky")

A beautiful sentence praising the moon, expressing emotion through scenery and expressing ambition through objects.

Some people face difficulties, do not make progress, and give in to bad environment. They may have temporary comfort and peace, but they get it at the expense of personality. Others choose to escape. They hid in their own narrow space to escape difficulties. They may live a quiet life, but they never show their individuality. But in this society, there must be another kind of people who are unwilling to be mediocre and unwilling to follow the trend, so they try their best to change the harsh environment around them and finally achieve the whole environment.

(Excerpted from Zibo examinee "The Personality of Coffee Bean")

If I were a bird, I would remember the nest when I was born. If I were a sapling, I would never forget to nourish my land. If I were a river, the snowy plateau would be a brand in my memory. If … no matter what I am, no matter how I exist, I can forget everything around me and even abandon myself, but one thing is indelible.

This is the reward.

(Excerpted from Guiyang examinee's interpretation of regression)

In winter, riding the autumn wind is not as colorful as spring, as rich and beautiful as summer, and as fruitful as autumn. When it comes to winter, many people will think of its cold and depression. Actually, it's not. This is the characteristic of winter.

(Excerpted from Zibo examinee "Winter Personality")

Most of the roots and flowers are not beautiful, but most of the flowers are dazzling and beautiful. It is precisely because of these ugly roots and flower roots that trees are lush, peonies are beautiful, osmanthus flowers are overflowing, and plum blossoms are proud of snow ... The world has become colorful because of the beauty of roots. Actually, we are the same. Appearance is just a kind of decoration, and it is the beauty that really expresses itself.

(Excerpted from Zibo examinee "Open Beauty")

Some people say that the sun is silent, but it brings warmth; The earth is silent, but it shows a wide range; The ocean is silent, but it is pregnant with life. I want to say that love is wordless, but it benefits the world.

(Excerpted from Jingzhou examinee "Bringing Love to Others")

There is a person who can exist independently in this world, and nothing can be successful without the whole society. In such a rapidly developing information society, we should be more aware of the importance of cooperation.

(Excerpted from Nantong examinee "Cooperation")

Notes like little angels, with a little smile and a little naughty, slipped through my fingers and merged into a rainbow-like beautiful movement. The notes are soft, one by one, and the player's mood is gently sung through mellow music. As a result, sweet notes seem to be full of the smell of flowers. All the cells in my body are immersed in the arms of notes, like drinking sweet Hua San.

(Excerpted from Yiyang examinee "Thanksgiving")

I am eager to have a teacher's green heart, full of spring colors, full of vitality and infinite hope. E I look forward to having a teacher's heart that belongs to spring. In this heart, there are flourishing trees. I hope to have a teacher's heart that reproduces spring, bright sunshine, elegant fog clouds, green buds, blooming buds, pleasant breeze and continuous drizzle. Because of this dream, my flower season will always be immersed in sunny days. ...

(Excerpted from Jingzhou examinee "Flower Season with Dreams")

Winter breeds spring, not fighting for it. Spring has come, and her cold skin gradually melts into a drop of spring water, selflessly irrigating the greedy seedlings. By the time a hundred flowers blossom and the sound of trees jointing, she has completed a year's historical mission and quietly returned to heaven with the gratitude of spring, waiting for the arrival of next year.

(Excerpted from Zibo examinee "Winter Personality")

I held the grass ring of hope and watched it slowly disappear from my sight. I sat down with a smile, only to find that the grass behind me was so green and full of vitality.

(Excerpted from Taiyuan examinee's "Blessing you, Big Brother who has met each other for a long time")

Praise is hope, praise is motivation. A hopeless goal is like an extinguished lighthouse, and a journey without motivation is full of difficulties.

(Excerpted from Anhui examinee "Eager for Praise")

Bringing a smile to life is like the sun shining on the earth, the breeze touching the warmth of the forest, the fiery glow of the sunset burning heaven, and the passion of the waves washing away rocks. ...

(Excerpted from Yizhou examinee "Bringing Smile to Life")

It is always like the sun when people are cold, the breeze when people are hot, the delicious food when people are hungry, and the shower when people are dry ... it will appear when people need it.

(Excerpted from Yizhou examinee "Bringing Smile to Life")

Life is like wild flowers in the suburbs, colorful and fragrant. The applause of life, like sunshine and rain, moistens every petal. A gift is a piece of sunshine shining in winter, which makes people who are hungry and cold feel the warmth of the world. Applause is more important than a gift. Spiritual encouragement inspires everyone who is lonely and helpless.

(Excerpted from Anhui examinee "Life Needs Applause")

A prominent and refined paragraph begins with a good sentence, which is the connecting link between paragraphs.

In the flower season, I am having a beautiful literary dream. ...

In the flower season, I am having a wonderful celebrity dream. ...

In the flower season, I have a colorful teacher dream. ...

(Excerpted from Jingzhou examinee "Flower Season with Dreams")

Winter is a sacred symbol. ...

Dong is a respectable and strict teacher. ...

Winter is the cradle of spring.

(Excerpted from Zibo examinee "Winter Personality")

For a middle school student, in today's era, he is not a qualified talent with only book knowledge and lack of practical ability. ……

For a worker, we should find the correct position in the coordinates of knowledge economy and market economy. ...

For a businessman, he should also keep up with the times and change his ideas. ...

For a leading cadre, the orientation, coordinates and quadrants of life must be well grasped. ...

(Excerpted from Hebei examinee "Grasping Life Coordinates")

One of my teachers is plain-looking and has no outstanding language. ...

A gifted but poor cousin of mine. ...

A humble, hardworking and thrifty neighbor of mine. ...

(Excerpted from Anhui examinee "Applause for yourself")

Do you think this is my character-a middle school student full of negativity, sigh and helplessness? No, my life has a new look!

(Excerpted from Zibo examinee "My Character Tells You")

This river winding among the mountains is the lifeblood of the town and the only communication channel between the people of the town and the outside world. That boat, which has experienced many vicissitudes, is the only means of transportation in the town. It is because of that room and that boat that the touching story of the ferryman came into being.

(Excerpted from Xuzhou examinee "The Old Mute on the Ferry")

So I stripped off the dazzling brilliance of success and looked for success, only to find that success is everywhere.

(Excerpted from Anhui examinee "Applause for yourself")

Wait, talking about cool based on the individual can only be superficial, and talking about cool in the big era will find true cool.

(Excerpted from Wuhan examinee "Shuang"

A beautiful sentence that integrates the whole and dispersion, is neat in form, magnificent and clear in meaning.

Quiet prose, biographies of leading celebrities, mysterious science fiction novels, humorous and lively foreign classics are my only love in the dead of night.

(Excerpted from Wuxi examinee "Enjoy the pleasure of buying books")

I appreciate the implication of Wang Guozhen's exclamation, the profundity of Zhu Ziqing's haste, the romance of Qiong Yao's misty rain, and the sharpness of Lu Xun's On the Surprise of Friends.

(Excerpted from Jingzhou examinee "Flower Season with Dreams")

How many villages and towns were swallowed up, how many fields were buried, how many people were displaced, and how many people struggled in the flood. At this time, the party's good cadres came, the most lovely people came, and young volunteers came. They used their flesh and blood to resist flood attacks again and again.

(Excerpted from Jingzhou examinee "Bringing Love to Others")

Composers write them on heartstrings, and performers let them flow in their hearts. Listen carefully! That lovely song, from the treetops, from the moon shadow, from the grassland, gently spread to all directions.

(Excerpted from Yiyang examinee "Thanksgiving")

Smile, and you will find what a noble virtue it is-

When falling, it gives people sunshine assistance;

When confused, give people a burst of courage;

When you are lost, give people a breeze-like comfort;

When impulsive, it gives people a kind of unrestrained mentality. ...

(Excerpted from Jingzhou examinee "Bringing Smile to Life")

When you are frustrated, you want someone to give you courage; When hesitating, you want someone to understand you; I want to give you warm applause when my spirit is poor.

(Excerpted from Anhui examinee "Life Needs Applause")

Innovation makes this era change with each passing day: the establishment of special zones has turned ancient fishing villages into prosperous modern cities; With the reform and opening up, the ancient civilization has gained new vitality, one country, two systems, and the second son has returned to the motherland.

(Excerpted from Wuhan examinee "Shuang")

I guess you still need format. I'll give it to you together. bend

Your composition "Beauty and Beauty"

Writing an exam is like marrying a girl who doesn't comb her hair and wash her face. Even if she works well, her husband's family will not be too happy. Who wants to marry a sloppy daughter-in-law? Moreover, this is a great disrespect for the husband's family. The marking teacher also has the psychology of being a daughter-in-law when reading the composition. Besides, there are a lot of "women to be married" in front of him. It's not that you don't marry! This is not pleasing to the eye, the next one is not pleasing to the eye, and the next one is not pleasing to the eye ... Sometimes the husband-in-law chooses a wife because the young man is old and should get married. It is possible to make do with it. Teachers who read the composition can ignore this one. He can't be with you. On the one hand, he is in no hurry to get a wife; on the other hand, he is wrong and asks for trouble. From this perspective, we really want to be "beautiful" in writing, at least let ourselves be "beautiful at first sight", even if it is a little "pockmarked", let him study it again carefully. It's probably not a bad thing if the marking teacher can spend more time on you. So, how do we do this? I think consciously beautifying the composition is the key.

Consciously beautify the composition can start from the following aspects:

1, pay attention to writing is the facade of composition, that's right. It's hot (because the senior high school entrance examination is in midsummer), and I'm not very focused. How can I arouse people's excitement after reading the messy ink of "spider crawling"? On the contrary, the whole composition layout of the workers makes people feel very comfortable, and maybe they will feel like drinking iced mineral water! Look, is it different? Furthermore, the grading is relative and has reference significance. Who is the referee? The ones in front of your paper. If those copies are "beautiful", you will become a negative textbook, and it is strange not to get a divorce certificate in advance.

2, pay attention to the title People often say: "The title is half good." This is not unreasonable. Looking at the excellent compositions of previous senior high school entrance examinations, most of the topics are very particular. So, how can we improve the ability to write questions? The following combined with the reality of some students in the senior high school entrance examination in recent years, to provide some easy-to-learn and easy-to-operate methods for candidates:

Coordinate method: use related or unrelated coordinate words as topics: the moon and people (excellent composition in 2000), honesty and life (excellent composition in 200 1 year) and blue pupa and Kingdee (excellent composition in 2003).

Citation: directly quoting or indirectly changing existing poems, songs, film and television advertisements, etc. That caused * * * to sing: "How is love tempered?" (Excellent composition for senior high school entrance examination in 2000) Looking from one side of the ridge to the top (Excellent composition for senior high school entrance examination in 2000) Understanding the gains and losses deeply (Excellent composition for senior high school entrance examination in 2002) Ignoring your ambition, letting peace go (Excellent composition for senior high school entrance examination in 2000) and the place where petals flow like tears (Excellent composition for senior high school entrance examination in 2003).

Rhetoric: Use rhetorical methods such as metaphor, personification, pun, metonymy, exaggeration, and questioning to make topics: "What does the car eat" (excellent composition in 2000), touchstone of beauty and ugliness of mind (excellent composition in 2002), flower-like life (excellent composition in 2002), and inspired crane (.

Viewpoint method: directly take the viewpoint of the article as the topic: honesty, never giving up (200 1 excellent composition for senior high school entrance examination) and honesty-the foundation of career (200 1 excellent composition for senior high school entrance examination).

Formula method: Borrow the inspiration from mathematical formulas such as XX+XX= Happiness (excellent composition in 2000) and 1.6 (excellent composition in 2006 5438+0).

Generally speaking, from the specific content and genre of the article, the proposed topic should be accurate, concise, eye-catching, novel and poetic.

4, pay attention to the end as the saying goes, weaving baskets is expensive, and writing is also expensive. How can I write a good ending to my composition? I think making a conscious ending is the key. After writing the composition, at least think about what "tricks" I want to end with. Here are some common ending methods: ① Echoing the beginning. Some articles should be holistic, with a beginning and no end, and readers are not welcome. (2) discussion is the conclusion. A good ending can not only deepen the theme, but also inspire and infect readers. 3 recessive performance. Implicit endings often give people the feeling of "lingering sound" and "endless aftertaste". Readers feel the charm of language in hints and implications. The end of Lu Xun's A Little Thing is: "This little thing is unique, but it always floats in front of my eyes, sometimes clearer, teaching me shame, urging me to turn over a new leaf, and increasing my courage and hope." If it is written like this: "His noble quality of standing up regardless of himself will always be an example for me to learn", it will be greatly discounted, because it is too straightforward, too "straight", too "exposed" and the taste is weak.