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Narrative composition with scene description
1. A full-score essay for the College Entrance Examination that contains a description of the scene
The only full-score essay for the Shanghai College Entrance Examination in 2008. They are at the end of the city, without bustling streets or shining neon lights; At the end of the city, there are only dilapidated shanty towns with people who have experienced the hardships of life; at the end of the city, there is a group of people like them.
What should I call them? Children of migrant workers? Farmer's children? Or the second generation of migrant workers? No, I don’t want to call them by these cold names. I want to call them by their earthy nicknames, hold their little hands, and get closer to their lives... They grew up in the green mountains and green waters of their hometown, pure and pure. The soul is heading and jointing in the fields. In the wind in the mountains and fields, they ran and looked forward to it.
The wind blew from the fields and into the city. For their livelihood and for the future, they followed their parents to the city and took root at the end of the city. So my eyes, accustomed to green mountains and green waters, encountered high-rise buildings and busy traffic for the first time.
They don’t know how to cross the six-lane road, and their little fingers can’t count the number of floors in the office building. The prosperous modern civilization has never brought them any happiness, but this time, it left a deep mark on their hearts.
They picked up their schoolbags and carefully integrated into city life. However, in the strange eyes of "city people", I understood for the first time the difference between a household registration and a temporary residence permit.
They are all parents’ treasures! But he prematurely took on a burden that did not belong to his age. When they get home from school, they prepare a simple dinner while their parents are still working on the construction site or in the market; when they wake up at midnight, they tearfully see that the starry sky in the city is not as bright as in their hometown; they quietly make a wish, hoping that tomorrow their children of migrant workers will not be unable to pay their dues in primary school. They were seized for paying the electricity bill... However, I saw their growth in their growing bodies.
I remember when a reporter asked a child from a migrant school if she would return to her hometown after completing her studies, the little girl said without hesitation: Of course, I will definitely go back! At that moment, I almost shed tears for their growth. I remember their childish declarations during the Spring Festival Gala that year: "Our school is small, but our grades are not bad." "We are not as good as the kids in the city." "Beijing's 2008 is also our 2008!" They gradually matured and said goodbye. From the shyness of yesterday, I begin to welcome the new day.
Although, they are still worried about the low tuition fees; although, the school still cannot pay the water and electricity bills; although, there are still many systems that are not perfect enough...Although there are many "although", but , only one "but" is enough, a lot of attention has turned to them, and they are growing vigorously. The sun rises from the horizon, lighting up the end of the city and lighting up their lives.
They will eventually become us. Comments from the marking teacher: The full score essay has five major advantages. First of all, the essay realistically depicts the living conditions of the children of migrant workers, from the unnatural and unadaptable experience from rural to urban areas, to the gradual maturity of their mentality, which makes people feel a A real group; secondly, the text of the composition is very smooth, and it can be seen that the candidate has a certain reading accumulation, but does not show off, and appropriately expresses his emotions and vision, and the text and theme match well; thirdly, overall The composition expresses the author's sympathy, concern and hope for his peers, speaking from his heart, which is also the embodiment of the requirements of the composition title; fourth, the description of this article is very delicate, "I can't count the number of office buildings with my little fingers." "Number of layers"; Finally, the article also focuses on the changes in the children of migrant workers, "They will eventually become us." The candidates did not just complain, but wrote about the changes and hopes.
The 2008 Zhejiang Provincial College Entrance Examination essay "Feeling the Countryside" with full marks. At first I thought that the countryside was a paradise for fairy tales. It fades away from the glitz of the city and washes away the complexity of the world.
It may be Al on Van Gogh's canvas, with a pure blue sky like a mirror, a sea of ??flowers as gorgeous as oil paint, and the golden sunflowers growing seeds of hope under the nurturing of the sun; it may be The pastoral in Tao Qian's poems interprets the story of the fairy couple in the mist, and the slanting sunlight is shining gently, which is a leisurely stroll. That is just the countryside in poems and paintings. When we truly enter the countryside and feel the countryside with our hearts, we will find that our countryside is experiencing pain.
There is sunshine there too, and the sunshine is not warm but scorching the land viciously. Looking from a distance, the rickety figure on the land spends all his energy on this land day and night, in spring and autumn.
He grew up in this land, and his sweat nourished this land; he learned to be strong in this land, and his footsteps solidified this land; he was born in the loess and returned to the loess, Generation after generation, endless life. The storm came, and his heart trembled like the swaying crops in the field. His tears crisscrossed his furrowed cheeks, like the water that flooded the field, spreading over his heart layer by layer and immersing his breath.
Drought came, and the crops swayed like his skinny body. He could not see hope or a good harvest, and his chaotic eyes were dry and empty. They also have happy moments, but this happiness seems so humble.
Their greatest happiness is a good harvest. The plump grains are like jewels, and the corners of their eyes smile like crescent moons. What they long for most is a life of smooth weather, and they only want and only want such an ordinary life.
Will such a countryside disappoint us when we face such a picture? In fact, the countryside becomes more real because of this cruel beauty. When experiencing the countryside, don't always be a leisurely tourist. While appreciating its tranquility and purity, pay more attention to its pain, and give more understanding and compassion to its hard work.
Feel the countryside, feel the beating pulse of farming civilization, feel China’s most profound cry, feel the weight of that land, feel the blood and sweat soaked in that land; feel the simplest persistence and perseverance of Chinese farmers, feel The pain and helplessness experienced by Chinese farmers. When we look at them with disdain, have we ever thought that it was they who gave us the hope of life with their blood and sweat?
Watching Chinese farmers stand eternity in China’s history with the humblest gesture, let us feel the countryside with our hearts! 2008 Jiangxi Full Score College Entrance Examination Essay: A Letter to Humanity: Good evening, gentlemen/ladies, first of all, let me introduce myself. I am Little Mouse - a member of the burrowing vole family. On the order of the patriarch, I am going to those who He has been fighting on the front line for a long time to catch snakes, assassinate owls, chase down weasels, and torture cats. 2. Narratives with descriptions of scenery
Persistence will lead to success
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. Life is like a number "2 ", only by completing that "bend" can we embark on the bright road. Before you succeed, you must persevere and stick to your beliefs. Only in this way will you succeed.
Last summer vacation, my parents and I came to Baili Gorge, known as the "Gorge of a Hundred Valleys".
In Baili Gorge, it is like spring all year round, with deep forests and luxuriant leaves. It is divided into three parts: Xizizigou, Yixiantian and Qianbu Ladder. Xingzigou is a winding hillside. From a height, it looks like a colorful ribbon winding around Baili Gorge. A line of sky is a path between two mountains, only wide enough for one person. The grand finale of Baili Gorge - the Thousand Step Ladder, also known as the "Ladder of Courage", has 2,304 steps in total length, and many people come here to see it.
My parents and I decided to climb up. At first, I laughed and jumped here and there. I got tired after a while. I could barely keep climbing. When I got halfway through the climb, I couldn't stand it anymore, so I sat down and said to my mother with a sad face: "Oh, I'm so exhausted. Let's go down!" My mother said, "Going down now is also walking. Half way up is half the journey. When you go up, you won't be so tired anymore. "Yes, people's will is often in a moment. If you work harder, you will definitely get there." Dad also stopped and followed me. explain. My heart trembled, but I still refused to move. Upon seeing this, my mother said: "This road now is like the road of life. Those who retreat are losers, and those who continue to persevere will taste the joy of success." After listening to what my parents said, I took my step again. My legs were like lead, and there were only two words in my mind: "Persistence." With the help of my parents, I finally stood on the top of the mountain, and finally felt the feeling of "seeing all the small mountains at a glance". I succeeded.
Success and failure often happen in an instant, and what makes you succeed or fail is persistence. If you persist to the end, you will taste the joy of success; if you give up, you will become an eternal loser. Because if you persevere, you will succeed. 3. A narrative composition must include a description of the scenery, no less than 600 words.
Today, we are going to climb Wuzhi Peak.
Arriving at the foot of Wuzhi Peak, five closely connected peaks tower into the clouds. They are lush and green. From a distance, they look like a huge open dark green palm. This is how Wuzhi Mountain gets its name. .
There are five wonders in Wuzhishan: strange rocks, strange cracks, strange caves, strange trees and strange vines. We walked through the winding paths and saw ancient arm-like vines entwined on the towering old trees on the roadside. The vine was bare, clinging tightly to the huge tree trunk and lying on the steep stone wall. It was unclear how long it was. It was said to be more than a thousand years old! Some strange and different boulders are dotted among the green forest.
Unknowingly, we came to the Five Fingers’ Wonderful Seam—the belly seam. This is a long, narrow stone crevice that gets darker as it goes in, and can only allow one person to pass sideways. I looked up and saw, ah! There is only a thin blue line left in the sky. The stone walls on both sides were slippery and wet. After walking for about ten minutes, my eyes suddenly opened up. We have already walked through the belly-grinding gap, and it really rubbed my belly just now!
Crossing the line of sky, various birds chirped one after another along the way, the distant mountain peaks were rolling, and the clouds covered the fog. Suddenly I heard a high-pitched and powerful Hakka folk song, and I quickly ran along the singing. It turned out to be a white-haired, ruddy-faced old man singing folk songs leisurely. After the old man finished singing, he told me that he had written all the lyrics engraved on the stone tablet describing the beautiful scenery of Wuzhi Peak. He is almost eighty years old and has lived in the mountains for decades.
The water here is sweet and the mountains are beautiful, which is very nourishing. Now he can even carry a load of more than 100 kilograms up the mountain! After saying that, he started playing and singing by himself again. The singing was so beautiful!
There are beautiful and peculiar scenery everywhere on Wuzhi Mountain. It is impossible to describe them. I hope you have the opportunity to go and see them. 4. Narrative junior high school composition with description of scenery
Appreciating lotus flowers in the wind
The weather has gradually become cooler after autumn. Today’s weather is particularly cool, and the breeze is blowing lightly. It echoed in the air and felt so comfortable when it blew on my face. Taking advantage of the cool weather and the gap before the start of school, my parents and I decided to take advantage of the cool breeze to watch the lotus, the hibiscus that emerges from the West Lake in June.
Bus No. 809 drove quickly through the tunnel and brought us safely to the West Lake in a short time. Standing on the shore of the lake, looking far into the lake at the various lotus flowers, they are so beautiful that you can't help but want to run there. I walked briskly to the lakeside, wanting to get closer to the lotus. I only smelled waves of elegant fragrance, which was refreshing and made people feel relaxed and happy.
White, pink, clusters of lotus flowers are supported by the green calyx, and the bright petals are even more beautiful.
The blossoming lotus flowers are in various shapes, like beautiful girls. Nearby is a lotus with unfolded petals, growing on the green lotus leaves. From a distance, it looks like a girl in a pink dress dancing gracefully on the green carpet; in the distance is a cluster of buds. The flower buds waiting to be bloomed look like a shy girl sitting on the grass shyly covering her cheeks with her hands when looking sideways; the lotus pods next to them are like small drums inlaid with gems, and the lotus girls are on this green stage. Sing, dance, hold a small concert with snare drum accompaniment...
The lotus leaves are big, round, and green, like a green jade plate; they are also like a big umbrella inserted in the water, one after another. No wonder Yang Wanli, a poet of the Song Dynasty, praised the lotus in this way in "Sending Lin Zifang to Jingci Temple at the Beginning of Dawn": "The leaves connecting the sky are infinitely green, and the lotus flowers reflecting the sun are uniquely red." Under the sunlight, the clear lake water and lotus flowers complement each other, forming a beautiful "lotus picture", which is very beautiful.
The lotus is so beautiful! All things in nature are really full of life! 5. A narrative composition of 600 words that describes the scenery and highlights the spirit
My friends
Friends are indispensable in a person’s life. Friends enrich my life and light up like a beacon. my heart. When I encounter difficulties, it is my friends who help me. When I encounter setbacks, it is my friends who encourage me. She and I help each other and make progress together. Although I can't say that she changed everything about me, in the process of getting along with her, I corrected many shortcomings and changed.
The first time I met her was in the second half of the fourth grade. She was average-looking and not that attractive. She had a pair of small eyes under her eyebrows that were not thick, but she was very charming. , The bridge of the nose is not high. She introduced herself generously and took the seat assigned to her by the teacher. After class, her seat was crowded with people. Everyone asked her what her name was, where she was from, etc. She replied: "I live in Liyanchi now." I whispered: "I live there too. Suddenly, she turned back to me and said, "Do you live there too? Can you come with me in the future? To be honest, the road in the cement field is too scary. I hope you can go with me." I froze there, stunned by her generosity and initiative. "What's wrong? Don't you want to?" She looked at me with her small eyes. I came to my senses and said, "No, I'm happy to!" From then on, we went to and from school together. During this process, I learned that her name was Liu Rui. She used to go to school in Altay, and her grades were among the best! She naturally told me about her living environment. I also listened with interest. She told me many things, for example, about herself and her teacher. Things between classmates, these things let me know that she is a very tolerant girl, who can always tolerate others. It is precisely because of her generosity and tolerance that we get closer. She can always tolerate everything about me. Even if I say harsh words, she still tolerates them again and again. Finally one day, I couldn't help but ask her: "Are you never angry?" She still said with a smile: "You should be more open-minded about everything and be more tolerant of others. In fact, it is also a way to cherish friendship. It’s a good way, it’s also good for you, right?” After listening to her words, I also learned to be patient and take a step back.
She is also very talented in painting. She can usually paint something vividly, which makes me admire her very much. She told me: "As long as you put your heart into it, you can do it well." I learned to do everything well with my heart.
She taught me a lot, but most of them were small principles in life, but it made me change a lot.
The moment of parting is always painful. I say goodbye to you with tears, my dear friend. At this moment, I just want to say to you: "Thank you, this is my inner confession, really ! Although we are far apart, our hearts are always connected because you are my best friend.
” 6. Narrative composition containing descriptions of natural scenery
Appreciating the beauty of nature
When we got up in the morning, the gauzy fog gradually dissipated, and with the first ray of sunshine in the morning, we drove Heading to the Sanqingzhai Natural Scenic Area, which is known as "the mountain that is suspected of being transformed by dinosaurs"
I was looking at the scenery outside the window intently, and the trees on the roadside seemed to be lined up in neat rows. The troops under review showed their military temperament, while the outline of the mountains in the distance was still hazy, submerged by the fog until only a faint silhouette remained. Seeing this scene reminded me of the mountains in ink paintings, this hazy The beauty is vividly expressed in the painters' brushes.
After walking through a muddy road that smelled of earth, we came to the foot of the mountain, where the water from the reservoir slowly flowed out. , the crystal clear water walked together, flowing happily, like that cheerful music. With this comfort and tranquility, we started climbing the mountain, but the sound of the gurgling water still lingered in our ears for a long time... …
Stepping on the mountain road full of thorns, we had no intention of admiring the scenery on both sides. We just focused on walking. On the winding and rugged road, under our feet were stones of different shapes and naturally growing plants. There is no obvious road at all, but the people walking in front of us have already stepped on a narrow road. Then I think of what Mr. Lu Xun wrote in "Hometown": "In fact, there is no road on the ground. Walking." When there are many people, it becomes a road. ”
After climbing for a while, a continuous mountain range came into view. The mountains were shrouded in mist, looking mysterious and beautiful. After another short break, the scenery in my eyes changed greatly. Look at that again The fog has gradually receded, and a mountain shaped like the word "mountain" is clearly and truly presented before our eyes. At this time, we feel that we are closer to nature, and we have to admire the uncanny creations of nature. , everything is natural, everything is the true beauty presented by nature.
Let your mood wander in nature. There is no hustle and bustle of the city; no clutter of the city; no rushing footsteps; The tall buildings are blinding. There is nothing delicate and artificial in nature; there are no traces of sculpture in the people in nature, and there is no pressure of utilitarianism.
When you are in the mountains, it is like this between heaven and earth. Spacious! Breathe the air with the aroma of earth, listen to the singing of birds, feel the warmth of the sun and the gentle wind, let yourself blend into nature, appreciate the tranquility and leisure, and embrace the blue sky and white clouds with your thoughts. I feel the joy of returning to nature with my heart.
In the embrace of the mountains, I sweat to my heart's content, breathe in the breath of nature, and take in every scenery of nature. Come into your mind and enjoy the beauty of nature!
Close your eyes, take a deep breath, and say goodbye to this short beautiful time... 7. Narrative composition describing the scenery
Friday afternoon! , the sun was shining brightly, the spring breeze was blowing, Teacher Li led us to a vivid "plant class" in the central square. There are so many plants in the central square!
The cherry blossoms are in bloom, it is Japan! The national flower of Japan is pink. A gust of wind blows, and it still exudes a faint fragrance. There is still a little nectar on the stamens. The cherry blossoms bloom first and then grow leaves. The leaves are all hanging down. I counted them. *** There are more than 20 petals, which are really beautiful! The red-leaf plum has also grown taller. It has not bloomed yet. When it blooms, the leaves will turn red, like a sea of ??red, which is very spectacular. It has also grown, and its uses are great. The root can be used as medicine to treat diseases. It looks like a leek. It is more planted in the south. A red peach flower has also bloomed. It blooms first and then leaves. It blooms full. The whole flower branch is like a bunch of candied haws, which is very beautiful. There is also a beautiful metasequoia tree in the central square, with a very straight trunk and a triangular crown, like a heroic soldier guarding our beautiful motherland. The flower is also very eye-catching. It has four petals, and the main trunk begins to branch about one meter away. It is really unique. The inconspicuous periwinkle quietly blooms on the ground. It has five small purple flowers. The petals are very cute, like "children" under the big tree.
There are also very precious tree species in the square, including the camphor tree, which is a tree species in the south, is very rare, and has a tenacious temperament. Vitality. There is also Ligustrum lucidum, which is a shaped tree in the shape of a cloud. It is made into a cloud shape using steel wires. It takes five or six years to form. This is for the sake of beauty and attracting more people. Come and enjoy. There is also a very precious flower, that is the golden bell flower. It has small white flowers. From a distance, it looks like there is a pile of snow in front of it that has not yet melted. The snow is white and snow-white. There is only this golden bell flower in our city. We Be sure to take good care of it so that it can thrive.
There are many plants in the square, including roses with thorns, osmanthus trees with beige flowers blooming, fragrant osmanthus trees, waving peaches that seem to be waving to everyone, and brilliant redbuds. , there are also thick and tall paulownia trees and small and cute fermented fermented grass. They are really colorful and countless, which opened my eyes! 8. Narrative composition of 600 words, with scene descriptions and narration
Because of the creek, the river and the sea can reach far; because of the blue sky, the sun shines brighter; and it is precisely because of the people who work behind the scenes that there is a stage The brilliance of the performers.
December at the end of the year is filled with a joyful atmosphere. Smiling faces of pedestrians can be seen everywhere on the streets and alleys decorated with lights. The New Year's class meeting in the class will be held soon, and I am secretly looking forward to it, hoping to become one of the hosts.
Being the host of the New Year’s class meeting is something I have longed for. Beautiful clothes, beautiful pronunciation, and the attention of the audience... I have hosted several flag-raising ceremonies, so I must be selected.
I feel so happy imagining myself hosting in front of the stage.
However, word came that I was the host writer. "What about the host?" I asked almost anxiously, but I didn't hear my name.
My heart seemed to have sunk to the bottom of the cold sea. I seemed to have seen others become the center of attention on the stage, but I could only watch from the sidelines, quietly and silently.
While thinking, I glanced at a cheongsam - it was the costume I wore when I performed at the art festival, and my thoughts couldn't help but go back to the past. Before going on stage to perform that day, I waited backstage. Unexpectedly, the backstage was so lively. The props team, the set-up team, the makeup team... everyone is busy non-stop. Although they are behind the scenes, everyone has a happy smile on their face, as if proudly saying: "Even though I am just a behind-the-scenes worker, But being able to contribute silently to the performance is just as happy and worthy of pride.”
Thinking of this, I couldn’t help but feel relieved. I sat down at my desk and began to think quietly. Isn't it just as proud to be able to write a wonderful hosting script?
Being willing to stay behind the scenes and be a foil is a kind of mind, a kind of tolerance, and a kind of spirit. Perhaps, when I sit in the audience and watch the host read the manuscript, I will also feel happy that I am a behind-the-scenes worker.
Thinking of this, I feel happy. 9. Narrative junior high school composition with description of scenery
Appreciating lotus flowers in the wind. The weather has gradually become cooler since autumn. Today’s weather is particularly cool. The breeze echoes lightly in the air and blows on my face. It feels very comfortable on the face.
Taking advantage of the cool weather and the gap before the start of school, my parents and I happily decided to take advantage of the cool breeze to watch the lotus, the hibiscus that emerges from the West Lake in June. Bus No. 809 drove quickly through the tunnel and brought us safely to the West Lake in a short time.
Standing on the shore of the lake, looking far into the lake at the various lotus flowers, they are so beautiful that you can't help but want to run there. I walked briskly to the lakeside, wanting to get closer to the lotus. I only smelled waves of elegant fragrance, which was refreshing and made people feel relaxed and happy.
White, pink, clusters of lotus flowers are supported by the green calyx, and the bright petals are even more beautiful. The lotus flowers are in various shapes and forms, like beautiful girls.
Nearby is a lotus with unfolded petals, growing on the green lotus leaves. From a distance, it looks like a girl wearing a pink dress, dancing gracefully on the green carpet. ; In the distance is a cluster of budding flower bones. Looking sideways, it looks like a shy girl sitting on the grass shyly covering her cheeks with her hands; the lotus pods next to them are like small drums inlaid with gems. The lotus girl They sang and danced on this green stage, and held a small concert with snare drum accompaniment... The lotus leaves are big, round, and green, like a green jade plate; they are also like a big umbrella inserted in the water, one after another.
No wonder Yang Wanli, a poet of the Song Dynasty, praised the lotus like this in "A Farewell to Lin Zifang from Jingci Temple at the Beginning of Dawn": "The leaves are endlessly green against the sky, and the lotus is uniquely red against the sun." Under the sunlight, the clear lake water and lotus flowers complement each other, forming a beautiful "lotus picture", which is very beautiful.
The lotus is so beautiful! All things in nature are really full of life.
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