Analysis of the Mid-term Examination in the First Term of Qishan Middle School and Model essay 202 1 (Wang Jianhong)

Wang Jianhong, Qishan Middle School, Baoji City, Shaanxi Province

Read the following materials and write as required.

From letter exchange to WeChat text flow, the way of communication is changing, and what remains unchanged is the expression of sincere affection.

Books on Chinese studies such as The Book of Songs and The Analects of Confucius have entered the family bookcase from the library, and the reading scene is changing. What remains unchanged is the pursuit of the philosophy of sages.

From "going abroad fever" to "returning home tide", the direction of dreams is changing, and the constant is the realization of personal values.

Society is developing and life is improving. Through the changes of the times, we can see that there is a constant background behind it. What are your thoughts and associations as a young man in a new era in the face of the changes and invariance of these times? Please choose an aspect to write an article

Requirements: choose a good angle, define the concept, define the style, and draw up your own topic; Do not copy, duplicate or disclose personal information; Not less than 800 words.

Composition analysis This is a multi-material task-driven composition. Starting from real life, the three materials expounded the philosophical proposition of "change and invariance". With the three materials of communication, reading scenes and going abroad and returning to China, the "unchanged" background color is displayed through changes in reality. As an introduction, three materials lead to the driving task: what thoughts and associations do you have as a young man in the new era in the face of the changes and invariance of these times? From the individual to the times, this paper examines the new youth's thinking about life, ideals and times.

On the premise of affirming that "the times are unchanged", the writing conception is linked with real life, and one angle is chosen to express one's understanding and thinking. When conceiving, we should correctly understand the "choose one aspect" in driving tasks. "One aspect" is a writing angle, which is not limited to one of the three materials, nor to one aspect of "change and invariability". "One side" embodies the openness of ideas.

Excellent topic

Change the great era, but never change the heart of a teenager.

Never forget why you started, and your mission will be completed.

Times have changed, but the years have not changed.

As a stranger, I will never forget my homesickness.

The world has its own true feelings.

Eternity of "vicissitudes"

"Outside" becomes "inside" unchanged.

Change with constancy-change with constancy.

Times are changing and feelings are eternal.

Model essay 1

"How long has it been since you greeted your parents face to face?" This is a speech by a contestant in I am an orator. With the development of science and technology and the progress of the times, we gradually lost the opportunity to communicate face to face with the people around us. Old friends I haven't seen for a long time still have something to say after meeting again because of the communication in WeChat. You can't greet your parents face to face, but a video phone call after dinner can still recall the warm time with your parents.

When the epidemic broke out in COVID-19 in 2020, it was the Spring Festival, which was supposed to be a brightly lit and jubilant moment, but because the city was closed, the wanderers could not go home. But the city and the city are cold and isolated, but the heart and the heart are still connected. It is WeChat that allows people to receive family blessings and peace reports on New Year's Eve. What the epidemic can't stop is the inseparable friendship among China people.

Once upon a time, cars and horses were slow and letters were far away. Nowadays, when you miss someone, a phone call and a WeChat can convey your feelings.

The development of science and technology has provided us with countless conveniences, making it easier for people to convey their feelings. Open WeChat, and you will find that elders and teachers who are usually unsmiling will also share their daily lives in the circle of friends. On holidays, you will also receive blessings from your friends. The way of greeting is getting simpler and simpler, but the communication of family is sincere.

Since wechat, we have more social interaction. Students who were not familiar with it have also become familiar with it, and topics that cannot be understood can be understood thoroughly through WeChat under the patient analysis and explanation of the teacher. When you stand in front of your house and don't take the key, send a WeChat and your parents will appear beside you. Wechat seems to bring not only affection, but also a magic wand, giving people fire when they need warmth, giving them direction when they need hope, and giving them friendship when they need warmth ... It seems to have the magic of deja vu, making people rely on him, just like when I was a child, I didn't want to let go of my father's hand and walked forward alone.

From correspondence to WeChat communication, the sincere friendship behind this has never changed. Although people are thousands of miles apart, there is no gap between hearts because of the development of communication technology. Once upon a time, when you open WeChat again, you will find that every weather forecast forwarded inside reminds you that it is cold, remember to add more clothes.

Thousands of miles away, there is WeChat, which expresses sincerely.

Fan Wen 2

Society is developing and life is changing. Speaking of the development of our country in recent years, the moon in August is really different every day. Speaking of countries, it's a bit big. Why don't I tell you my home?

? My grandfather

According to my grandfather, my ancestors were civilians for more than ten generations. At that time, they didn't have a chance to study, just knew their names. I have to do farm work at the age of eight or nine, and I have been trying to fill my stomach all my life. Although it is far from the ancients' "work at sunrise and rest at sunset", I go to the fields to see crops every day. Grandpa also said that when he and his grandmother got married, the two families sat together and had a meal, and they got married after getting a certificate at the notary office. Two people have lived together in the yellow land all their lives, and grandpa's time is yellow.

My father

Dad is a standard post-70 s, old-fashioned, kind, frugal and even stingy (maybe he was afraid of being poor when he was a child). Dad is the youngest in the family, so he is favored. He is the only child in the family who has read books. Dad also told me that he still had a literary dream, but under the pressure of life, he bowed his head and gave up his literary dream. My father is still a farmer. He is no longer rooted in the yellow land like his grandfather. He will go to the fields during the awning and autumn harvest, because he has entered the era of mechanization and everything will be done in half a day. On other days, my father will go out to work and earn some extra money to subsidize his family. We don't have to worry about food and clothing anymore. Our living standard is gradually improving. Dad's time is the green of hope.

I

As a new youth of 2 1 century, my life is completely different from theirs, and my times are colorful. Pay attention to balanced nutrition when eating, pay attention to speed and efficiency when traveling, and so on. The popularity of WeChat Alipay makes our efficiency higher and higher, and high-speed rail makes travel more convenient. We should not only know a few words, but also develop in an all-round way. We no longer care about food, clothing, housing and transportation, but can develop our own hobbies. Our life is still full of infinite possibilities.

In grandpa's time, the country was solving the problem of food and clothing for the people; In the era of dad, the state worked hard to make people run towards a well-off society; In my time, the country aimed at meeting the people's growing and beautiful material needs. The times are developing and the goals of the people and the country are changing, but what remains unchanged is our yearning for a better life.

As new youths, our task is to contribute to the construction of the motherland and create a better life for the people. Everyone knows that "the constant will change", but they don't know the next sentence "the constant will change". Let's respond to our constant pursuit of a better life with a changeable future.

Fan Wen 3

The eighth grade physics textbook says: nothing is static, everything is moving, that is, everything is constantly changing.

Static is relative, while dynamic is absolute. We have been running at a high speed, and everything is changing from the solar system to molecules and cells.

People often say: "The cloud is thousands of miles away." The shape of the cloud is changing. Maybe it becomes a look in the blink of an eye, and so does everything in the world.

Throughout the ages, our life has undergone earth-shaking changes. Can Yan Di and Huang Di in China's ancient civilization imagine what the world will be like thousands of years later? Does Qin Shihuang know that people have different views on himself? In the Ming Dynasty, thousands of strange people tried to fly in the sky. Did they see that our place was originally a sphere when they flew into the sky? Liang Qichao of Kang Youwei's generation, is it clear that China has stood among the world powers? ...

Ancient gentlemen pursued "self-cultivation, keeping the family in order, governing the country and leveling the world". When they are old, they pack their bags in a hurry and pursue opportunities to make contributions everywhere. In ancient times, communication was inconvenient. Sometimes when you go out, you may never come back. I can only find opportunities to report my family's safety. The ancients didn't have mobile phones, so computers could only write letters. It often takes several years for a letter to be delivered, but after several years, is the recipient still waiting? Nowadays, high-tech products emerge one after another. You can see the smiling face on the opposite mobile phone anytime and anywhere, and the convenient transportation has never frozen the homesickness of the wanderer. Although the times are progressing and the mode of transportation is changing, the feelings closely related to relatives have become eternal.

"Falling red is not heartless, but turning into spring mud is more protective of flowers." The flower has changed its shape and turned into a red flower sprinkled on the soil, but her attachment to this land has not changed.

When a young soldier who has just entered the battlefield and has a boiling passion becomes a dying hero, there will still be tears in his eyes when he hears the national anthem, and his patriotism has never changed!

The cloud in the sky is changing rapidly, but its essence has not changed. Still a small drop of water.

With the development of high technology, people can do what they want without leaving home, and the essence of ideals and pursuits has not changed!

In ancient times, no one could imagine what the world would be like thousands of years later, but bright red still flows in our bodies. Let's step on the bell of the new era and step into the door to open a new journey!

Fan Wen 4

Once upon a time, cars and horses were slow and letters were far away.

? inscription on a tablet

The progress of science and technology, towering high-rise buildings, the noise of cities, colorful streets, traffic on the roads, changing society and lifestyle, what remains unchanged is the friendship between people.

You see, during the Spring Festival, there are fires in the streets and lanes, and firecrackers can be heard from time to time. Seeing the joy of going home to see my family, the family sat around to eat and play. Everyone's face is filled with a happy smile. They are old or young, but they are all expressing their friendship with actions. After a long time, family members are still our closest relatives, and we all enjoy the joy of this moment, enjoying the nagging of our mother, the exhortation of our father and the inquiries of our seven aunts and eight aunts. This is a constant affection, and this is the warmth of our family.

When you fell down, who was there to help you? friends. In this world, we have more or less several sincere best friends and sisters, who spend the happiest youth with us, go crazy with us, have fun together and walk through the darkest road together. If the first half of your life is accompanied by your parents, then the second half is accompanied by your friends. They may not be great or perfect, but they are always with you in your darkest hours. Some people say that friends made at the age of fifteen or sixteen are lifelong friends. May we all be friends for life. This is the constant friendship.

There must be a person you like hidden in our hearts. Some people like it silently, some people pursue it boldly, and finally, there are many things to grind, but they have all had sadness and pain, had happy memories and felt the ups and downs of love. If they are still together after all this, they must envy the love of others and finally move on to the next stage of their lives, with the other half. He will take the place of his parents and accompany us through the rest of our lives. Two unrelated people depend on each other and give each other warmth. When it is cold, he will remind them to wear more clothes, take care of them when they are sick, and encourage and comfort them when they are sad and fail. This is the most common and comfortable love, giving you what you need, giving you love and accompanying you all your life.

The world is changing every day, and so are we, but what remains unchanged is that the feelings between people, whether family, friendship or love, are an indispensable part of our lives and the most precious bit of luck in our life journey.

People are constantly flowing, and there is always a warmth that belongs to you.