Are there any prose with charm?

Zhu ziqing

I went to Xianyan for the second time and marveled at the green of plum rain pool.

Plum rain pool is a waterfall pool. There are three waterfalls in Xian Waterfall, and Meiyu Waterfall is the lowest. Walking to the hillside, I heard the sound of flowers blooming and falling; Looking up, a piece of shiny white water appeared in front of me with two wet black edges.

Let's go to Meiyu Pavilion first. Meiyu Pavilion faces the waterfall; Sitting on the edge of the pavilion, you can see all this without looking up. Deep under the pavilion is the Meiyu Pool. The pavilion stands in a prominent corner of the rock, and it is empty from top to bottom; Like an eagle spreading its wings and flying in the sky. There are mountains on three sides, like a half ring; People are at the bottom of the well. It's cloudy in autumn. Slight clouds flow over our heads; There is a little oil on the rock surface and grass, and it is green because of humidity. And the waterfall seems to be particularly loud. The waterfall rushed down from above, as if it had been torn into strands; It is no longer a neat and smooth cloth. There are many edges and corners on the rock; When the waterfall flows, it makes a sharp crash and splashes like flying flowers and broken jade. The splashing water is crystal clear and full of awns; From a distance, like a small white plum, it rained one after another. It is said that this is the reason why Meiyu Pool got its name. But I think it is more accurate to be like Huayang. The breeze rises, and it drifts a little with the wind, which is more beautiful. -at this moment, a few points were accidentally sent into our warm arms, so we got in at once and couldn't find them anymore.

The sparkling green of Meiyu pool attracts us; We started chasing her clutch light. Grasping the grass, climbing the rocks, leaning down carefully and bowing on a stone dome door, we reached the edge of the swimming pool. Waterfalls are between sleeves; But there is no waterfall in my heart. My heart swings with the green of the pool. Intoxicating green, like a huge lotus leaf, is covered with strange green. I want to embrace her with open arms; But what an illusion this is. Standing by the water and looking at that side, it actually feels a little far! This paved thick green is really cute. She is loosely wrinkled, like a skirt dragged by a young woman; She gently fiddled with it, like a beating virgin's first love heart; She is smooth and shiny, like "bright oil" and soft as egg white, which reminds people of the softest skin they have ever touched; She doesn't bother me, just like a warm jasper, only clear-but you can't see through her! I've seen Populus davidiana in Shichahai, Beijing, and it seems too weak to get rid of the yellow background. I have seen a tall and dense "green wall" next to the Tiger Running Temple in Hangzhou. The endless green grass and overlapping leaves are too thick. As for the others, the waves in the West Lake are too bright and the waves in Qinhuai River are too dark. Cute, can I compare with you? How to compare? Probably this pool is deep, so it can accommodate such a strange green color; As if the blue sky had melted into it, it was so fresh. That intoxicating green! If I can cut your ribbon, I will give it to the dancer of light; She will be able to float in the wind. If I can fan your eyes, I will give it to the blind girl who is good at singing; She will have a pair of bright eyes. I am reluctant to part with you; How can I give up on you? I patted you and touched you with my hand, like a little girl of twelve or thirteen. I touched your entrance again and kissed her. I'll give you a name, and I'll call you "green daughter" from now on, okay?

The second time I went to Xianyan, I couldn't help but marvel at the green of Meiyu Pool.

Comments:

"Green" is one of Mr. Zhu Ziqing's early travel prose "Traces of Wenzhou", which was written on1February 8, 924. This is a beautiful article full of poetry. The article not only takes "green" as the title, but also uses "green" to naturally link the whole article together.

The structure of the article is very small, only four paragraphs, about 1200 words. This is different from ordinary travel prose, but expresses the author's feelings through the green pool of Meiyu Pool. So the first paragraph only used one sentence, "I went to Xianyan for the second time and marveled at the green of Meiyu Pool." The pen is abrupt, but the topic is orderly, so that readers can understand the center of this article at a glance. "Meiyu pool is a waterfall", and the beautiful scenery like flying flowers and broken jade is written to set off the strange and lovely water in Meiyu pool. Writing Meiyu Pavilion is only for the transition to writing plum rain pool Pavilion. All these pave the way for the following description of plum rain pool's "green". Therefore, the author did not describe the process of the tour in detail, but made a concise and vivid introduction to the waterfalls and Meiyu Pavilion along the tour route. In the middle of describing the Meiyu Pavilion and the waterfall, two sentences were inserted: "This is the thin cloudy weather in autumn. Slight clouds flow over our heads; Both the rock surface and the grass show a little moist oily green. " It not only explains the season of travel, but also deducts the word "green" from "some oily green", always taking care of the center to be described in the article. Finally, the full text suddenly stopped with the sentence "I went to Xianyan for the second time, and I couldn't help but marvel at the green of plum rain pool", but it still came down to the word "green", which reflected the beginning. A pen is extraordinary, and a bundle is neat. The difference between the end and the beginning is that only the word "can't help it" is added, but it is a vivid stroke. After the author's description, even readers can't help but be surprised by the green color of Meiyu Pool.

The word "green" not only plays a relevant role in the structure of the article, but also is the focus of the full text. The author, like an expert in calligraphy and painting, used various techniques such as metaphor, personification and association to describe the strange, lovely, moist and soft plum rain pool water from all angles, and integrated his admiration, joy and yearning into this piece of green. "The sparkling green of Meiyu Pool attracts us; We began to chase her sacred light of separation. " How well the two words "attraction" and "chasing" are understood! The strong attraction of the green color of Meiyu pool to "me" and my desire to appreciate the lovely green color are integrated. At this point, love and scenery are as difficult to decompose as water emulsion. Through metaphor, the author not only describes the quiet beauty of the pool, but also "seems to be a huge lotus leaf covered with strange green", which makes the author have the delusion of holding her; It also describes her dynamic beauty. "She is wrinkled loosely, like a skirt held by a young woman ..." With the author's brush strokes and the author's emotional waves, not only slight green ripples appear in front of our eyes, but shining green waves jump between our fingers, and a soft, lively and cordial feeling will overflow from our hearts. The author even imagined her as "like a little girl of 12 years old", wanted to pat her, caress her, kiss her, and called her "daughter green" smartly, which was very feminine. Bright and colorful pictures and interesting feelings are harmonious and unified. In this poetic green, the author's love for life is fully revealed, and the author's upward passion is high.

The article "Green" is a household name, not only because it vividly depicts the "strange" and "intoxicating" green of Meiyu Pool, but also because of the rich poetry between the lines. It has not only the artistic conception and structure of poetry, but also the emotion, artistic conception and language of poetry. It can be said that poetry is text, and there are poems in the text. The latter three, namely sincere and rich emotion, bold and rich imagination and vivid language, are the main factors that constitute the poetic characteristics and unique charm of green.

Although "Green" is a landscape prose, "all scenery words are sentimental words", the author melts his "heartfelt feelings" about the motherland's landscape into the detailed description of the scenery in "plum rain pool", which makes the scenery not only delicate and vivid, but also profound and sincere, expressing "the voice of the author's inner singing", thus making the full text full of poetry and painting. At the same time, the author's expression of this emotion is not like the Yangtze River, which flows thousands of miles, directly expressing his own thoughts, but using the brushwork of playing hard to get, first suppressing and then promoting. First, the word "Jing" is used to express the overall feeling of plum rain pool's green, which also symbolizes the author's internal motivation to pursue and explore the scenic spots in plum rain pool. Then through vivid and meticulous description, it shows us a three-dimensional picture of the surrounding environment of Meiyu Pool.

In "Green", the author also gives full play to his rich imagination, creates a vivid image, brings readers into a poetic artistic realm, strongly expresses the author's sincere and rich feelings, and has a strong artistic appeal.

Mr. Zhu Ziqing is quite accomplished in language. His prose language is mostly spoken, concise, simple and natural. In order to express his feelings, he paid great attention to the tempering and processing of language, and paid attention to the creation and refinement of words, striving to create the artistic conception of poetry with vivid and vivid language, and to achieve an "unattainable realm" in simplicity. Green language is very representative. To sum up, there are three aesthetic characteristics: painting beauty, dynamic beauty and music beauty.

The body of painting now uses only one sentence in the author's description of the mountain waterfall: "A white, shiny water embedded in two wet black edges will appear in front of him." Using a word "mosaic" to describe the waterfall in the mountain stream is accurate and vivid, which makes the waterfall full of three-dimensional sense. Dynamic beauty, the author writes that the image of Mei Yuting is "sitting on a prominent corner of the rock, empty up and down, like a goshawk spreading its wings in the sky." A word "ju" is full of momentum, and a word "fu" is full of expression. With a word "ju" and a word "fu", it turns static into dynamic, and the Meiyu Pavilion standing in the air and on the stone is vividly written. The music is beautiful. The green language has a clear sense of rhythm and a clear and harmonious melody. It is catchy to read and beautiful to express, which can make readers intoxicated with beautiful music and produce aesthetic characteristics of "both pleasing to the ear and pleasing to the ear".