Please help me with my English composition for the third year of junior high school! After writing it, translate it. High reward!

Hope it will be adopted, thank you.

I went to Changsha for my holiday on a train.It was very hot. The temperature went up to 38 centigrade.It was stuffy and crowded in the carriage, so many participants wanted something to drink.Just then , a young man came to deliver water with a water jug ??in hand. "Water, water.Free water. "The young man shouted while walking.

I took the train to Changsha for vacation. The weather was very hot, with temperatures reaching as high as 38 degrees Celsius. The carriage was stuffy and crowded, so many passengers wanted to drink water. At this moment, a young man came with a kettle to deliver water. "Water, water. Free water supply." The young man shouted loudly as he walked.

A middle-aged woman asked for a glass of water and was very thankful to the young man.But after a while, two tall and strong men came to charge her 5 yuan for that glass of water.The woman looked at them for a while,then she took out a 5-yuan note from one of her pockets and handed it to one of them.Though she said nothing, her eyes were full of anger.The two men went away without any sense of shame.

A middle-aged woman drank a glass of water and thanked him very much. But after a while, two tall and strong people came and asked her for 5 yuan for water. She looked at them for a while, then took out a 5-yuan note from her pocket and gave it to one of them. Although she said nothing, her eyes were full of anger. The two men walked away without any shame.

This was the most unpleasant trip I have ever had.

This was the most unpleasant trip I have ever had.

This was the most unpleasant trip I have ever had.